SacredUnity
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SacredUnity9mthReplied to GifflarGodThank you for checking it out anyway, but after the new chapter, I hope you still let me know your thoughts and opinions, cuz I am still learning and improving
The next morning bathed the village in a warm, golden light, the air vibrant with the melodies of birdsong. Li Wei stood on the threshold of his former life, his heart a mix of excitement and uncertainty. Sage Yu, a figure of wisdom and power, stood beside him, a guiding presence as they ventured beyond the village's boundaries.- SacredUnity9mthReplied to GifflarGod
Thank you for the feedback, I hope that you didn’t feel disassociated from the story. But I will definitely write the story from this point on so that it can be easier for any reader of any age to read it. I really appreciate it
The next morning bathed the village in a warm, golden light, the air vibrant with the melodies of birdsong. Li Wei stood on the threshold of his former life, his heart a mix of excitement and uncertainty. Sage Yu, a figure of wisdom and power, stood beside him, a guiding presence as they ventured beyond the village's boundaries.