Hmm.. do you mean viability? Like it’s able to be used by a very large number of people? Otherwise, how could it be popular if no one knows about it yet?

This is kinda stupid. I understand that it’s a translation and I can’t make any worthwhile inputs. However, the fact that nothing actually changes plot-wise in an overall sense completely negates any draw this story has and also shows that while the author has a decent head on his shoulders for developing Mark himself as a character as well as for making up awesome pseudo-science, he/she refuses to change relevant plot points in order to add unnecessary drama. Sure it’d be boring if a character came in and with a wave of his hand made everything all better, but there needs to be actual influence on the major plot points in order to be effectual. This is, of course, just my opinion and can be taken with a grain of salt. I just feel rather strongly about it.

Yayyy! I love this. Hope there’ll be more eventually.

Hey author dude, I was wondering if you could maybe post up an Auxiliary chapter with A) a list of all his current Pokémon and B) the names and professions of all his friends and family? I’m having a rather hard time keeping up with everyone.

Hey author dude, I was wondering if you could maybe post up an Auxiliary chapter with A) a list of all his current Pokémon and B) the names and professions of all his friends and family? I’m having a rather hard time keeping up with everyone.

This is my first five star review in recent memory. I’ve followed it from the start and had read the author’s previous work as well. And while I enjoyed the other one, this one has seemed to work its way into first place for me. It really captures the essence of Fairy Tail, the goofy campy stuff, the guild’s sense of family, and throws in some fun surprises along the way. The two OC’s are perfectly blended in without being obtrusive yet also change canon in logical ways in response to their presence. The harem isn’t forced, there’s real believable build up to each new member, and the lemons aren’t in your face and thrown in haphazardly without regard to the overarching plot. They’re also clearly marked so readers who want to skip, can. Just pay attention to the author notes for those instances where the lemon is further down and there’s still plot relevant writing at the beginning. The only complaint I could possibly see is how long it takes to reach canon episode/chapter 1. But honestly how it was done makes way too much sense for the complaint to be at all valid. So, suck it up, read it, and enjoy it. All in all, very well done and I can’t wait to keep reading. Thanks!

Ah yes, the Apple of Discord. Gave Billy and Mandy lots of trouble, that it did.

Misandristic*

Of course it’s their choice. “Here’s a key to everything you could ever dream of for your planet and loved ones, buuut in order to get all the bells and whistles you have to join my harem. But yea, it’s totally your choice and I’m not a complete scumbag for dangling what amounts to salvation in front of you in exchange for your body.” There are so many better written plot lines that make much more sense that answer the question “why a harem?” out there you could have drawn inspiration from. Hell, you wrote better reasons to be a part of a harem before, Ein. This is basically sugarcoated coercion mixed with prostitution.

Relationships are forced. Partners are put into a catch 22 situation where they either get awesome stuff if they agree to be in the harem or they lose out on it if they don’t and it’s not about their feelings at all. The feelings that do sprout are due to basically Stockholm syndrome. It REALLY started off strong. Super strong. So much wasted potential.

He is blind and can’t see Mount Tai.

Blizzard of Ice

I’m getting Last Blood Elf vibes from this paragraph. Lol, next he’ll be stealing hats.

Oh I haven’t had that in a long time. I should go to the store and see if I can find it.

So three anime so far? Plus a H animation? What other worlds are tied to his?

Thanks for the chapter, and thank you for coming back. Take your time. No offense meant by my hydra comment earlier in the chapter when she revealed her name to Pierce. I know that stories, especially stories about overcoming mental trauma, need stuff like that. Your writing honestly reminds me of a similar story about Wally West, Kid Flash, on AO3 called In The Life (While Running Blind) by DoctorMerlinReid. If you haven’t read it, you should. It’s pretty epic. And your story is turning out just as epic.

Hmm knowledge transfer will be better here I think

If you’ve never watched, read, or been spoiled on ANY lore in Naruto, this is for you. For the fans who’ve steeped themselves deep into it? I believe you’ll spend a LOT of time scrolling past walls of text regarding things you already know. Don’t get me wrong, it’s very well written. The exposition is very well done. The world building is top notch. For those that have the time and patience for it, and really want to immerse yourself in it, this really really is for you.

Gary

Ash