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Paxloria_79773mthCommentedThe previous writing proves that this is a lie.
The great profound pill was a top-grade Profound Realm medicinal pill. It did not have any side effects, and his cultivation increased rapidly.- Paxloria_79773mthCommented
Strength goes up while understanding goes down, rather than breaking through soon, isn't he in danger of getting stuck or suffering Qi Deviation?
After a day, Chu Xuan had recovered to the peak of the first level of the Profound Realm, and he was on the verge of breaking through to the second stage. - Paxloria_79773mthCommented
EEEEH!? Was writing "decrease" in the previous sentence really not an accident but done on purpose? This makes no sense at all! The term "realm" when used here, means level of understanding or comprehension. It's impossible for 'realm' to decrease as strength (cultivation level) increases! At worst it would stay the same(stagnate) and become a block on the path of cultivation later.
Although his realm had decreased a little bit, his strength had almost doubled. - Paxloria_79773mthCommented
This is an error. It is impossible for his foundation to become more solid but his real to decrease. There for, it should be an accident that the Author wrote decrease when he clearly instead meant increase.
Originally, he had already reached the peak of the first level of the Profound Realm. With the cultivation of the great emperor's scripture, his foundation became even more solid, and his realm also slightly decreased. - Paxloria_79773mthCommented
'able' not 'unable'
The Mortal Gate was hard to break, and countless people normally stopped there. If one was unable to break through the Mortal Gate, they would eventually become immortal. - Paxloria_79771yrCommented
Name problem!
"What do you mean?" Lin Qingzhu frowned. This name sounded a little scary. - Paxloria_79771yrCommented
Isn't her name Liu Qingfeng all this time?
Lin Qingzhu shook her head. She did not know him either. However, Xiao Yi, who was beside her, showed fear. "Saint of Heaven, He Wushuang…" - Paxloria_79771yrCommented
Ha ha ha! Looks like another 'fateful' meeting will happen!
Xiao Yi's heart warmed as he smiled. "Yes, Father, I understand." - Paxloria_79771yrCommented
Liu Qingfeng is a girl not related to her and there has been no mention of any male person in this story also named Qingfeng and there was that mention of Qi Hao. Speaking of Qi Hao, why doesn't he use his fathers family name?
Ye Qiu was stunned for a moment before Ming Yue explained, "Martial Nephew Qingfeng is Ruyan's biological brother." - Paxloria_79771yrCommented
Qingfeng? do you mean Hao instead?
Liu Ruyan was happy to hear Ye Qiu's praise and humbly said, "You're too kind, Martial Uncle! Ruyan's aptitude is poor, how can I be compared to my brother?" - Paxloria_79771yrCommented
CORRECTION: Qi Hao does not fear Liu Qingfeng either. He has never heard of her before, nor does he know anything about her. So really, he still thinks he's the unchallenged BEST in the sect.
Qi Hao was extremely confident, even conceited. In the entire Heaven Mending Sect, apart from Liu Qingfeng, he really didn't fear anyone. Although he was obsessed with beauty every day, his strength was not low. Otherwise, how could there be so many girls attracted to him? - Paxloria_79771yrCommented
Look at the problem with this sentence. It says hat Liu Qingfeng won't participate. Although she lacks experience, several chapters have been spent saying that she would participate.
Qi Hao was a level one Celestial realm expert. In the entire Heaven Mending Sect, other than Liu Qingfeng, he was the strongest presence among the disciples. Liu Qingfeng wasn't participating in this year's Martial Meeting. So, he could be said to be the internally decided champion. - Paxloria_79771yrCommentedCh 6 I Heard You Want to Teach My Disciple For Me?
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He gave a cultivation manual to his Disciple, so he should get an even better one back right?
As he spoke, he took out a book from behind his back and handed it to her. "This book is my Violet Cloud Peak's heritage cultivation technique, the Violet Cloud Treasure Tome. - Paxloria_79771yrCommented
Wasn't it 72, not 74?
Being suppressed by the Great Dao power of the 74 Fiendcelestial Dharma Idols, the Dao Heavenly Devil couldn't withstand it at all. - Paxloria_79771yrCommented
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It could be said that the small city was full of people making trips to and fro the Divine Phoenix Empire and the Huoyun Sect every day. - Paxloria_79771yrCommented
This doesn't make sense. His Junior brother & sister told him about what happened while he was away, so how can they not have told him about Master fights & strength?
He was also clueless about Jiang Yiming's current realm.