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Greedsmith21dCommentedCh 223 NOT A CHAPTER!- Greedsmith21dReplied to isli
Breed
Grace Eswald (grandmother) - Greedsmith21dReplied to isli
Breed
Viviane Eswald (first step-daughter): not ready - Greedsmith22dCommented'Thanks, brotherâŚfor nothingâŚ'
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reliant -> forgiving (because he is gonna be reliant on them to help with providing a vessel for him, not forgiving makes more sense or a word like it)
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and the -> and that
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I mean, itâs not THAT odd. The Will of the Origin Expanse gives you what you need most when you use the first scroll you get, right? So why wouldnât it do the same when using this super expensive scrolls? I forgot the names of the scrolls. đ
Michael smiled upon realizing how well-tuned the powers of his Major Seals were. Despite hating each other, the Wolf Curse and the World Serpent's powers were highly compatible. That was odd, but who was Michael to complain about something this nice? - Greedsmith22dCommentedAt first, Michael thought that the Major Seal's name was Swallow. He was fairly sure that the World Serpent's power was to swallow. In retrospect, it would make a lot of sense as to why Michael was so hungry. However, that wasn't all the Major Seal was. Another word followed Swallow.
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showered -> showed
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dead -> death
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Maybe this is part of the being closely ingrained into the Origin Expanse explanation from earlier?
The expansive plain wasn't in the same space as the Nest. Nonetheless, it wasn't in a different space either. Michael guessed that the Gladiator Arena was in a small pocket dimension connected to the arena. But even if that was the case, Michael should have been able to see the runic array responsible for the transportation into the pocket dimension. That wasn't the case, though. - Greedsmith22dReplied to 1Midas_touchCh 795 Spar III
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Ligno'vsh -> Ligno'vsh's
This paragraph has been deleted. - Greedsmith22dCommented[She is a maniac like you!] Danny exclaimed. [We found another idiot!]
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Qi sprouted -> Qi, sprouting (because you already used "manifested", it sounds better)
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forces -> forced
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augment Ligno'vsh -> augmentation Ligno'vsh's
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3 chapters later: "The spar was still not over." đ Not that I donât like these kinds of chapters.
The spar was still not over. - Greedsmith22dCommented'Are you ready?' Michael asked in his mind.
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much of an opportunity -> much time (saying opportunity twice in a row feels weird)
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