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did bro just rizzed up the persona?
Honestly, the more I learn about the Nyx, the more I fear Maruki. Dude literally revived people, manipulated reality, and altered the memories of all humanity. Honestly, he made me think that Makoto could seal Nyx without making a Great Seal out of his soul.
The velvet room as a courtroom makes me think of what would happen if Sae was a wild card :D. Though her velvet room would probably still be in casino form though, lol.
A question has been on my mind for about a week. Theoretically, if Akechi had a palace, what kind of palace would it be? It's pretty obvious that the presence of his persona, clearly hints at the absence of a palace, but honestly, I can easily imagine that with Akechi's mental state, his palace still exists, even if it doesn't have the shadow of the palace owner. I've always gotten the picture of a creepy liminal space that emphasizes his insanity, but because his insanity can be considered “controlled”, his palace looks like a specific place, most likely one that often pops up in his head when he remembers his childhood. And honestly, I extremely rarely see discussion of what other characters' palaces in the game might be like if they had the “distortion”.
IS THAT THE GRIM REAPER?????
Now I really wish someone would call him "Soldier Boy"
Didn't Katheryne allude to the fact that it's not just the player who can use teleport waypoints? Or was she just breaking the fourth wall?
Bruh, the official creator of this story has already created more than 70 chapters, which is several times larger than what is published here. The person here probably just brazenly stole someone else's story and indicated p treon in the synopsis. Don't you think it's at least despicable to make money off someone else's work?
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Despite the small mistakes, I think it's a pretty good fanfic! Considering the fact that I personally haven't seen many fanfics on this game, your fanfic can be called a nice find. c:
My words may have sounded rather aggressive too, for that too I apologise. It's just that little things like that can get in the way of reading when you're involuntarily paying attention to them.
I agree, at the time, it would have been a bad idea to beg for any information. Later, however, they spent at least a year together. Velvet could tell Ryu about the world outside the prison during that time.
I have to admit that it was a good idea to try to somehow bring Ryu and Velvet closer together before breaking out of prison, but instead, Velvet could train Ryu and he would become on par with her in strength, with the help of muscle memory.
Velvet had mentioned the word earlier in her backstory, but he hadn't even thought to ask about it.
Why is she even explaining it?
What is Ryu doing at this point? Just watching?
How is he going to train her? He literally has amnesia. Velvet has more experience than Ryu from hunting boars... Even if one suddenly imagines that his muscle memory helped him, that doesn't mean he can help her with her own training.