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MrSloppyTard

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  • MrSloppyTard
    MrSloppyTard1yr
    Replied to VeganMaster

    Aah I see, thanks for explaning.

    Currently, Ken was physically at the level of a Chunin while being more skilled in battle than the majority of Jonin out there.
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  • MrSloppyTard
    MrSloppyTard1yr
    Replied to VeganMaster

    I mean i get the strong part, dont really understand the technique part, why would he be more skilled than a person whos been trained from childhood to be a soldier?

    Currently, Ken was physically at the level of a Chunin while being more skilled in battle than the majority of Jonin out there.
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    Naruto: The Blind Swordsman
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  • MrSloppyTard
    MrSloppyTard1yr
    Commented

    I mean Åska is thunder in swedish. Aska is ashes.

    (A/N: Aska means thunder in Swedish, I tried to find a name that meant lightning that sounded cool, unfortunately I couldn't)
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    Lightning Human in MHA
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  • MrSloppyTard
    MrSloppyTard1yr
    Commented

    Man, your pumping these out. Thanks for the chapter.

    Ch 3 Chapter 1 (Part 3 of 3)
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    MHA: Heroic Dating Simulator
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  • MrSloppyTard
    MrSloppyTard1yr
    Commented

    I feel like there's alot of info dumps so far, and alot of tell not show.

    Ch 10 Old Shack
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  • MrSloppyTard
    MrSloppyTard1yr
    Commented

    I mean he did this to try to tie him to his village right? So 'his' village stays strong and doesn't lose a great asset. I mean he thinks Wu will become the next 'God of Shinobi'. He doesn't care about him, he cares about the potential he has, to do what he failed to do.

    Closing his eyes, Hirzuen allowed Wu's words time to settle, a tired smile developing across his face as he muttered, "Because you know, no matter how I scheme against you, we are not enemies. I genuinely desire what's best for you, Naruto, and all the children in this village...if I had the power, I would carry on Lord Hashirama's dream of a world where no child has to experience war or bloodshed..."
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    I, Your Father, Carry a Big Stick
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  • MrSloppyTard
    MrSloppyTard1yr
    Commented

    What a nice suprise, Thanks for the chapter.

    Ch 3 Chapter 003 – Kokuyo
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    Rise of the Dragon - A Naruto Fan-Fiction
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  • MrSloppyTard
    MrSloppyTard1yr
    Commented

    Don't really like music lyrics in stories, ruins the flow of the reading. Thanks for the chapter

    Ch 1 Prologue (REWRITE)
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    (NEW FANFIC) In MHA with DnD Spells?
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  • MrSloppyTard
    MrSloppyTard2yr
    Replied to GodOfFreedom

    Alright, Thank you.

    Ch 12 Chapter 12 – Destination Shimotsuki Village
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    The Lone Wolf - A One Piece Fan-Fiction
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  • MrSloppyTard
    MrSloppyTard2yr
    Commented

    So i don't know if i missed it, but whats Ina's age? I find it hard to picture her when i'm not aware of her age. Thanks for the chapter.

    Ch 12 Chapter 12 – Destination Shimotsuki Village
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    The Lone Wolf - A One Piece Fan-Fiction
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  • MrSloppyTard
    MrSloppyTard2yr
    Replied to Morg535

    I guess, but you dont acually hold your blade to another, other than movies to add extra tension in the scene.

    Thirdly, Rudeus also needed a way to protect himself even after their blades clashed. Assuming his opponent had equally dense Mana Reinforcement layered on their weapon, it would take more than a minute to carve through with his Wind element buzzsaw. The Intermediate Earth spell Iron Buckler fulfilled this purpose.
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  • MrSloppyTard
    MrSloppyTard2yr
    Commented

    I mean this is a shit spell then, why would you stand there clashing swords for a minute, theres a shit ton of other moves that could be useful compared to this.

    Thirdly, Rudeus also needed a way to protect himself even after their blades clashed. Assuming his opponent had equally dense Mana Reinforcement layered on their weapon, it would take more than a minute to carve through with his Wind element buzzsaw. The Intermediate Earth spell Iron Buckler fulfilled this purpose.
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  • MrSloppyTard
    MrSloppyTard2yr
    Commented

    So they aren't twins?

    "But you're only a year older than me, Loki!" Law complained, running after me.
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    One Piece’s Illusionist
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  • MrSloppyTard
    MrSloppyTard2yr
    Replied to Zombie

    Sure, but why though? I mean i don't really understand why Dale would contact Josh over this, they've met like twice or trice from what i remember. And Josh doesn't seem like the dude to just help people willy nilly.

    Ch 30 <Familia> (2/2)
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  • MrSloppyTard
    MrSloppyTard2yr
    Replied to S3ntinel

    Im fine with that, that isnt forgiving her tho.

    Ch 51 Mother and Son Conversation.
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    Chaotic Journey.
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  • MrSloppyTard
    MrSloppyTard2yr
    Replied to LiYao

    Thats just backtracking on character development. Hopefully he doesn't forgive her.

    Ch 51 Mother and Son Conversation.
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    Chaotic Journey.
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  • MrSloppyTard
    MrSloppyTard2yr
    Commented

    I mean you're just writing scenes from the first episode and adding a tiny bit.

    Ch 5 Chapter 4: He Saw Us
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    Trials and Tribulations of the Oathkeeper
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  • MrSloppyTard
    MrSloppyTard3yr
    Commented

    This is some great stuff, keep up the good work. Thanks for the chapter.

    Ch 6 Fighting and Viewing The Fight
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  • MrSloppyTard
    MrSloppyTard3yr
    Commented

    Pretty weak, first you force romance then you unforce romance. You didn't even show the conversations. Only 'Scum' and 'You know i manipulated you'.

    This chapter has been deleted.
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    Fate-Hopping
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  • MrSloppyTard
    MrSloppyTard3yr
    Commented

    You've got my interest. Thanks for the chapter.

    Ch 1 A fanfic gone wrong!
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    Prototype: Apex Predator
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