this story is shit, compared to nothing it's zero, because the author doesn't write anything or develop the story, it has few words and it's confusing without a script and without text, because he/she is lazy, seriously go writing and taking months or weeks to do so is disappointing

Yes

Very good work, I hope you continue with this work!

I loved the idea of Jack in One Piece, if you could also put his compass in this work it would be incredible, I hope this wonderful work continues

Rebeca

becoming the only country that remade slavery into their constitution

so I have an idea that you can put in your story, there is a character in the history of the French revolution called Joseph Boulogne Chevalier de Saint-Georges, there is even a film that tells his story “Cheveliere” which is very good. He was very important for the period before the French revolution and during the revolution, his history was erased by Napoleon, but resentfully his history is being rescued, he was commander of a brigade made entirely of black soldiers, there are many things that were lost because of Napoleon, who restructured slavery later in French history.

Hello, I loved your story, will it continue? I hope so!!! I would like to see him get stronger and stronger, but you left him very robbed in a short time 😂😂 the story needs to be worked on and rivals made for him

so I have an idea that you can put in your story, there is a character in the history of the French revolution called Joseph Boulogne Chevalier de Saint-Georges, there is even a film that tells his story "Cheveliet" which is very good. He was very important for the period before the French revolution and during the revolution, his history was erased by Napoleon, but resentfully his history is being rescued, he was a commander of a brigade of only black soldiers, there are many things that were lost because of Napoleon who restructured slavery later in French history.

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aí em João pessoa é quente? Aqui em ouro preto é frio que nem no ártico!

Serei um vigia de banheiro, se eu encontrar um tipo de metal em vc não me leve a mal

Você é do Brasil?

the author so I wish you could put the MC's encounter with his sister, the one who appears in the last season of Lucifer's show!

so my opinion about your fanfic is that it is good, but it has a lot to improve. I've seen a lot of people talking bad, but I think they're exaggerating, because if they don't like it they wouldn't be reading the chapters and honestly I think what you're showing is the MC's personality is very cool, but it needs improvement, because you put it as passive in a lot of cases, but I don't know what you have in mind in the next few chapters, but I want to give some advice it doesn't make the MC have a Harem because I think that sort of thing is too far-fetched, especially in worlds that it doesn't have bigamy, like Harry Potter.

man I would like to know which chapter of the novel that the author said is our amazing MC of this novel, because I have many questions: what will the child's gender be?, what happened after he became king?

man I would like to know which chapter of the novel that the author said will be our amazing MC of this novel, because I have many questions: what will the child's gender be?, what happened after he became king?

Muito bom sério, gostaria de aprender com você autor, pois acho o seu modo de escrita muito legal. [img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]

hello author! Right? hope so! well I finished the KnB fanfic and I liked it, but you said that after 1 month of hiatus you would publish the fanfic again and I would like to know if it will continue or not? since it is taking almost a year of hiatus!

Ivy Potter