Really, two weeks for American visa? I guess if AI could hack databases - than its possible, but there is still a part where a living person had to sign decision by hand and submit it by walking, no computer could hack that.

It is true that novel had a great potential and somewhat unusual main character, but Drama killed it all. At some point MC started to become dumb and retarded just for story progression purpose: Author clouldn't make an interesting story about self-efficient and composed character with clear image of his dreams and goals, so he mutilated his hero into sobbing mess of confusion and stupidity. And other critical flaw - unreliable narrating. For example - in one chapter there was sudden appearance of a woodoo-exorcist. He stated that his semi-legal organisation with cringe name have no valid evidence of MC's crimes, only suspicion. And in next chapter, another generic horny villian appears, out of the blue, with some sort of unmentioned compromising materials. Wow, what an amazing twist! (No). The last thing that bothed from the start is that story flow in a very runabout way, so there were no clear image of characters in reader imagination. You can easily image anyone in place of these characters, as they lack any constant personality, traits or description. Most of these characters described only once, and it is frustrating to always return back in chapters and search for their appearance details to get a better picture of what is going on.

Ah, unreliable narrating again. First they had no clues and now they have all files with... compromising evidence?

They didn't have anything at all, since the spirit haven't said anything - these people can only label MC as prime suspect.

How convenient, a perfect "piano in the bush" situation.

MC interactions with any female characters reminds me of sticky fly trap. They instantly fell into that trap of his supposed charm, sometimes exert all sorts of obscene liquids, other times they showing serve symptoms of reproduction instincts, and all of them losing ability to think straight.

Very 'interesting' wiggling mass of abominable narration, that betrays itself, rewriting past statements in boring new light and follow the pattern of being rip-off version of "Endless Path: Infinity Cosmos". Basically - a fever dream of youth, about self insert in world of DanMachi, but with pesonality and self representations on a level of Apollo clown.

There is so many conflicting paragraphs here, as if novel were written by outdated version of ChatGPT

But you have said that he had done so because of strange elemental affinity, no? You are unreliable narrator, author.

That emotion is called - "tantrum". Common thing among kids in children garden.

The events are so fast paced here, that author don't even have time to write in proper language! They're forced to use a slang slur just to keep up with action scenes.

Clown costume, perhaps?

... And he got blessing from the world, welcoming him in DanMachi. Looks like world is hating it's populace.

It's impossible not to notice, unless he is partially numb in his body senses. Author, you should make better excuse to show off his "fallen-babel-tower-sleeping-dragon" naked sausage next time.

lame name, lame Familia choice. Author, please, put the Hestia in your novel description, so that people could either came right for it, or ignore novel before reading. I personally hate that character, and I believe there are more people like that.

Let's assume it's a proper code and not matrix gibberish - is it Java? Python? C++? Ruby? Or perhaps, Basic? It would be hilarious in its own way if he were walking around and eradicating things with sword, that simply "cast" script-like-spells that are looking in the eyes of gods as "if (target.collision != base.damage * over9000)"

Prince of Persia is looking for your location.

They wierdly overweight, had stars and stripes tattoos, or have other signs on their bodies? Because otherwise they look no different from European's.

why not moving entire limousine out of the way? he could have fasten seatbelts over human baggage over there and move the car away

and where did he get this highly detailed image from?