3. (middle of chapter 365) Improved the transition between Thomas changing into his Shadox form and the door he is suddenly in front of. (most of the credit goes to Revellor as the better transition came from him). We all know how bad my transitions are but they aren't going to suddenly improve overnight. I'm working on it.
What a day! WHAT A GLORIOUS DAY! The Immortals unleashed their war cry, the name of their great leader, as they charged toward what would surely be their useful deaths! The golgari formed a fortress before them, their combined shields creating a wall of golden light that the ants just couldn't wait to run into.
VErY GOOD! SHE THiNKS WE WANT TO pLAY?! hAHAHAHA! We'LL SHOW HEr HOW WE LIkE TO PLAY! WE WilL SHOW HER HOW IT'lL FEEL WheN WE PLAY WITH HEr! mAKE HER REGRET AND SuFFEr! TEAR THIS LITTLE BASTARd TO TINY, TINY PIeCES! BUrN heR HAIr! tHIS PIeCE OF SHIT WILL DIE!!! YOU HEar THAT? DIE!! SHE ThINKS We'rE HER PLAYtHINGS?! No… THAT LITTLE bitCH Is OUR PLAYTHING!! READY OR NOT?! HERE WE COME!!! [???]