Kyorkuna
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Kyorkuna3mthReplied to AurealisI sometimes fall asleep while reading I could've accidentally wrote something while asleep
"If you have time, come and find Alice to play."- Kyorkuna3mthCommented
considering 100kg is only 220 or so pounds they are actually pretty weak
There were six cement boards, each one meter long and wide, and ten centimeters thick, probably weighing more than a hundred kilograms each.detailMythical Era: I Evolved Into A Stellar-Level BeastEastern · Encounter Atop The Celestial Mountain - Kyorkuna6mthCommented
Culprit and this is the final paragraph I’m reading I’m dropping this
-"We have a matter at hand, there has been a murder here, and the corporate, we don't know yet. Even our cameras couldn't see who it was but from the look of things, we have a 'Down-worlder' amongst us," the Sergeant added. - Kyorkuna6mthCommented
This author uses higher vocabulary to make the story better but makes mistakes with simpler words
They discovered a lifeless body sprawled motionless on the cold, tiled floor. The figure, dressed in a nightwear, lay surrounded by a pool of congealed blood that painted a macabre tableau. - Kyorkuna6mthCommented
Win** Prize**
–Play the game 'Worlds Unleashed' and when the golden price. - Kyorkuna6mthCommented
Revealed**
<Punishment for failure: (Hidden!) will be reviewed when the host fails to complete the task> - Kyorkuna6mthCommented
Reward**
<Rewerd for completion: +5 attributes points> - Kyorkuna6mthReplied to little_black_horse
False he said upgrade and downgrade
[host has received the function Daemon Downgrade!] - Kyorkuna6mthReplied to ZurblurisIn an instant, a brilliant beam of vibrant blue light surged forth from Jacob's body, illuminating the surrounding area with its radiant glow. The bullies recoiled, their faces contorted with shock and bewilderment. The force of the ethereal beam propelled them backward, lifting them off their feet and throwing them aside like rag dolls.
- Kyorkuna6mthReplied to Little_North_Star
Died works here he would have to lengthen the sentence a little to say death
Jacob had lived in an orphanage since his parents died in a car accident, leaving just him with no one to care for him. - Kyorkuna6mthCommented
Great starter to a little back sorry on the bullying with this character and explaining a grudge that could form or explaining a feeling of helplsssness within the mc before he gets the system
Jacob ignored the boy as he carried on running down the school corridor. The harassment and bullying had become a daily occurrence for him from day one. - Kyorkuna6mthCommented
Confusing but okay I get it somewhat architecture being like the make up of the creatures it’s a stretch but it works
[Your Magic Skill "Perfected Assimilation[A+]" has evolved into "Devouring Architecture[S]".] - Kyorkuna6mthCommented
Light is his oldest summons he survived since the start of the climb and has only been able to keep up with the growth of mc barely because of his passive and active skills
"Yeah. The wolf seems pretty useless though. Still, it feels like he cares about the kitty cat a bit too much." Raven commented. - Kyorkuna6mthReplied to Jereme_Roger
Not true he spent 5k not to long ago to buy the inven tory
[You have defeated a Mutated Rhino Beetle. 7'000 Gold Coins and 14'000 Experience Points earned.] - Kyorkuna6mthCommented[You have defeated The Seventh Floor's Guardian. 30,000 gold Coins and 60'000 Experience Points earned.]
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False
'I haven't checked my Stats since devouring that Royal Minotaur Skeleton...' - Kyorkuna6mthCommented
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'Now I can have 5 Guards... Guess they're called Underlings now... Sin will be remembered as the only Guard I ever had, I guess...' - Kyorkuna6mthCommented
I’m hating the broken thought process
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Nice
Then, with the addition of 36 energy points from the eighteen corpses, his Available Energy is now 69 points. - Kyorkuna6mthReplied to Space_kook
Completely unethical in a real battle I feel like most teenagers would prefer scythes I would like to see a spear user myself
"Can I use a different weapon?" Silas looked down at the wooden sword in his hand. Sure, swords were cool, but they were a little too generic. A little too basic. He wanted to use something like a bow and arrow, a spear, or even a staff that could be used for both close combat and magic casting.