I know reviews on here are different so 5 stars doesn't mean 5 stars somewhere else. however I still put 5 stars for everything because I do believe for the people who read here and what tends to do well that this is a good book to read. the progress is fast enough for the readers on here to enjoy but also not too fast where it turns into a fast food fan service novel. there is a good plot and the universe is very bog and intriguing enough to keep exploring inside and outside the origin expanse. I do love the depth that is coming into the characters after the initial showing of their most outside and basic characteristics. and the way power is developed and keeps getting more complex is also very interesting and fast enough to enjoy without making it too easy on the mc. overall a very good book for the type of audiences on here to enjoy. not up to the level of Supreme magus or shadow slave but close enough to deserve an amount of respect for the authors originality and skill. hope you like my review because I don't do this often author San.

yup

she knows he has abilities...where did she think he got them? she should know by now that he was healed and saw all his skills

great lol

I think this would be better with more articulated sentences

I would like to also know the answer to this question

idk about this book. it gives me mixed signals. it seems realistic about cliches on one hand and on the other I want to argue against everything it stands for. it's a conundrum. however it is an original take on cliches so it's worth a shot to open your views on other books.

I love the completing her sentences part. it's great

I did like your other book however I'm getting a very childish vibe. and I do get it because they are children but I'm just not used to this. I just hope it goes away soon

didn't blame him? he's pretty much scum bro blame him all you want

nope. its even worse. could be a fake or doppelganger. until the end you never know. anything is possible with plot

who is them? that's the question

it's personal opinion I'd be surprised if a lot agree

no character development in ten chapters? omg report to the authorities Imediately!!!

I read harem god first and then this. I get the idea of hating tropes and everything however in my opinion you're doing a great job at making the tropes look like jokes and its increasingly entertaining. keep it up. I hope you can stay being an author instead of having to get a menial job. I will use you're success as an inspiration to do the same. best of luck

I'm not an author so I don't understand the pressure however you write how you want it to be and look at comments for inspiration or introspection. read the negative comments and just ask yourself if you portrayed it wrong or if they misinterpreted it. there is no need to take toxic comments to heart. they are still paying even if they don't like it lol fuck em

I'm aspiring to be an author and you have opened my eyes. I always thought that the more serious novels like supreme magus are the way to go. so reading something like this and enjoying it so much has opened my eyes. thank you lol

speed of sound

gotta go back to the 2 to 3 girls only. keeping it small and having fleshed out characters instead of 50 girls I don't know the name of. or just do it like the profane prince and only have a couple or a single wife and a bunch of sex slaves lmfao

5 year old on a motorcycle? lol