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Phoenix_Paradise

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I think I've read more light novels than I have braincells.

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  • Phoenix_Paradise
    Phoenix_Paradise23d
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    define what you mean by a "bit too technical". thanks for the chapter.

    Anyway, this one became a bit too technical, I know. Getting lost in the details is the whole thing that I do. Please let me know if you have any ideas about the future of this book. I'm looking forward to your comments.
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    Harry Potter and the Dovahkiin
    Book&Literature · DreamyApe
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  • Phoenix_Paradise
    Phoenix_Paradise1mth
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    How in-depth does the potion work in this fanfic? Is it down to the genetic level? Or purely just appearances. Thanks for the chapter.

    "Mark me now with thine own ears and witness this solemn vow I inscribe," Pettigrew began, with Ron Weasley's voice taking on an uncharacteristic gravity, "Hearken unto my oath, scribed in blood and sealed by magic most binding."
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    Enchanting Melodies (HP SI)
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  • Phoenix_Paradise
    Phoenix_Paradise1mth
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    Author, you spend too much time taking the magic away from Magic. Thanks for the chapter.

    Anyway, the artifact created an independent physical projection creating the illusion of time travel and rejoining each other with their memories seamlessly when it is used in the future. It was a dirty trick, but it seemed to work. There were many holes in that theory, probably ones that the researcher who probably became an Unspeakable, fixed decades back. Without any access to the sand, there was nothing Harry could do anyway.
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    Enchanting Melodies (HP SI)
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  • Phoenix_Paradise
    Phoenix_Paradise2mth
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    However, if you are looking for opinions then stick to your current method; or do both, just a suggestion. Thanks for the chapter.

    I await your answers!
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    Douluo Dalu 2: Legend of the Ice and Fire Douluo
    Anime & Comics · iLyannn
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  • Phoenix_Paradise
    Phoenix_Paradise2mth
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    1

    Give Tianmeng to Huo Yuhao
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    Douluo Dalu 2: Legend of the Ice and Fire Douluo
    Anime & Comics · iLyannn
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  • Phoenix_Paradise
    Phoenix_Paradise2mth
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    As a suggestion for multiple options, like this, you could place them in the comment section of the chapter and go by the amount of likes they get. Thanks for the chapter.

    I await your answers!
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    Douluo Dalu 2: Legend of the Ice and Fire Douluo
    Anime & Comics · iLyannn
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  • Phoenix_Paradise
    Phoenix_Paradise2mth
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    Don't give his the original "cheats" of Huo, but make up your own. Thanks for the chapter.

    Leaving that aside, do you guys think I should give the Skydream Ice Worm as the MC's first soul ring? Please give me your opinions.
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    Douluo Dalu 2: Legend of the Ice and Fire Douluo
    Anime & Comics · iLyannn
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  • Phoenix_Paradise
    Phoenix_Paradise2mth
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    * her adoptive -> his adoptive

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    Douluo Dalu 2: Legend of the Ice and Fire Douluo
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  • Phoenix_Paradise
    Phoenix_Paradise2mth
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    * her adoptive -> his adoptive (only applies if "Yu Haochen" is male)

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    Douluo Dalu 2: Legend of the Ice and Fire Douluo
    Anime & Comics · iLyannn
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  • Phoenix_Paradise
    Phoenix_Paradise2mth
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    * her adoptive -> his adoptive

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    Douluo Dalu 2: Legend of the Ice and Fire Douluo
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  • Phoenix_Paradise
    Phoenix_Paradise2mth
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    Instead of smallest you can use pettiest. Petty (pettiest) meaning: of little importance; trivial.

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    Douluo Dalu 2: Legend of the Ice and Fire Douluo
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  • Phoenix_Paradise
    Phoenix_Paradise2mth
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    * Her shoulder-length -> His shoulder-length

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    Douluo Dalu 2: Legend of the Ice and Fire Douluo
    Anime & Comics · iLyannn
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  • Phoenix_Paradise
    Phoenix_Paradise2mth
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    Is the author altering how magic works within Harry Potter? Thanks for the chapter.

    Nick wasted no time at all searching the system for any book on the subject of whatever the abomination used but found only a single work on it that was WAY out of his price range at a whopping five hundred million points. Nick was not surprised at the price or that the knowledge was so rare either as it was obviously extremely high tier and also the sort of thing no one in their right mind would try and learn. From what Nick could tell the magic was basically pure destruction given form to the point of erasing matter itself.-
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    Harry potter: The ringmaker
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  • Phoenix_Paradise
    Phoenix_Paradise2mth
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    It's reached a point where I'm preferring the original Gilderoy Lockhart over this one. Thanks for the chapter.

    "Okay, that's fine. So tomorrow, we can act like none of this happened. But I want you to know, Andi. I want you. I want you more than anything I have ever wanted in my life. You were willing to give up your whole world and lifestyle, your family, for him, a man that doesn't appreciate you. Can't you be willing to do the same for me? To accept my faults and embrace them?" She gave up the pureblood life for him, which must have been quite an adjustment. But she is capable of it, and she could quite easily accept polygamy.
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    The Will of Gil (Gilderoy Lockhart SI)
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  • Phoenix_Paradise
    Phoenix_Paradise2mth
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    The Don Rabbit from Shangri-la Frontier (anime)? Thanks for the chapter.

    An example of ballad enchanting was the song of creation that he had sang while creating the Arda Milme ring. It definitely fell into the same branch of enchanting as the Celebrimbor style but was of a higher tier and more of an instinctual thing than a thing that could be learnt. One could not simply train to achieve it but had to have the right stimulus and conditions inherently alongside an opportunity for this gift to manifest. Nick had been avoiding it after the creation of the realm as he feared what it may do to him.-
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    Harry potter: The ringmaker
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  • Phoenix_Paradise
    Phoenix_Paradise2mth
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    Creating a Gigai then? Thanks for the chapter.

    As bad as it sounds the entire purpose for finding a mate was to well , mate and create offspring. That was not an option for ghosts like Helena so Lupin romancing her was the equivalent of cutting off his bloodline unless he chose to cheat on her or they had a weird concubine type deal later with a living woman. Nick refused to interfere however as they were both adults and could make their own choices and did not need his opinion on the matter. Truthfully Nick knew that this was likely to happen when he created the way for ghosts to have corporeal bodies eventually.-
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    Harry potter: The ringmaker
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    Phoenix_Paradise3mth
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    Thr Mage constellation is a Guardian constellation, and its charges are the Apprentice, the Atronach, and the Ritual. Those born under the sign of the Mage are thought to have more magicka and a talent for spellcasting. They are also thought to be arrogant and absent-minded. Thanks for the chapter .

    [Age: 16][Race: Dunmer][Sign: Mage]
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  • Phoenix_Paradise
    Phoenix_Paradise3mth
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    Doesn't that mean that anyone can cast the 3 Unforgivables so long as they says the spell name and do the necessary wand movement despite Intent being a major factor in casting them successfully? I am confused. Thanks for the chapter.

    This was because apparition worked based on the concept of spatial tunneling that involved creating a small tube of magic that flung the wizard from one spot to another based on the coordinates they set. Normally this process would take a period of time to make calculations but thanks to the nature of magic that wasn't necessary so long as the rules of apparition were followed. See magic as a whole had this funny property of remembering spells so that the next time they are used even if it is by a complete idiot they only need the words and wand movements to succeed if there is no intent in the spell.-
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    Harry potter: The ringmaker
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  • Phoenix_Paradise
    Phoenix_Paradise3mth
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    In addition to this, this path also provides the user with heightened capability for mind magic (occlumency/legilimency).
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    Six Paths of Harry Potter
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  • Phoenix_Paradise
    Phoenix_Paradise3mth
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    Well.. he could ask Grindelwald. Thanks for the chapter.

    'Third is that my high profile actions are drawing attention to them and like every shadowy organization they really don't like that. Fourth is that even with what I have shown they are still confident in killing me which is concerning to say the least. And at the top of this list of facts is that I don't have a bloody clue where to even start looking to find this group.' Nick contemplated the situation and did not like the conclusion he came to , that he should do what they wanted for now at least.-
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    Harry potter: The ringmaker
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