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define what you mean by a "bit too technical". thanks for the chapter.
How in-depth does the potion work in this fanfic? Is it down to the genetic level? Or purely just appearances. Thanks for the chapter.
Author, you spend too much time taking the magic away from Magic. Thanks for the chapter.
However, if you are looking for opinions then stick to your current method; or do both, just a suggestion. Thanks for the chapter.
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As a suggestion for multiple options, like this, you could place them in the comment section of the chapter and go by the amount of likes they get. Thanks for the chapter.
Don't give his the original "cheats" of Huo, but make up your own. Thanks for the chapter.
* her adoptive -> his adoptive
* her adoptive -> his adoptive (only applies if "Yu Haochen" is male)
* her adoptive -> his adoptive
Instead of smallest you can use pettiest. Petty (pettiest) meaning: of little importance; trivial.
* Her shoulder-length -> His shoulder-length
Is the author altering how magic works within Harry Potter? Thanks for the chapter.
It's reached a point where I'm preferring the original Gilderoy Lockhart over this one. Thanks for the chapter.
The Don Rabbit from Shangri-la Frontier (anime)? Thanks for the chapter.
Creating a Gigai then? Thanks for the chapter.
Thr Mage constellation is a Guardian constellation, and its charges are the Apprentice, the Atronach, and the Ritual. Those born under the sign of the Mage are thought to have more magicka and a talent for spellcasting. They are also thought to be arrogant and absent-minded. Thanks for the chapter .
Doesn't that mean that anyone can cast the 3 Unforgivables so long as they says the spell name and do the necessary wand movement despite Intent being a major factor in casting them successfully? I am confused. Thanks for the chapter.
Well.. he could ask Grindelwald. Thanks for the chapter.