Ok I wonder if the author felt all cussing and rage from his readers at the end of the last chapter “oh that’s the word count so cut” &$@?%#>€£+¥}|%^**€<?€££**#}|<>£££^*€>?>>!>>??>>>€€€€

Holy sheet Harly Quin is channeling Deadpool it’s the end of the omniverse.

Ok I have a question what the heck is theMC’s last name I was expecting it at the sorting but no , please don’t try and say he doesn’t have one if they did not have a last name on record the orphanage would have given him one upon taking him in. Please correct this it’s such a huge oversight

Please stop fueling my depression and have some good karma come his way soon.

Ok his options skill can only get 1 point per day and needs 1000 points that is just short of 3 years. This guy is getting screwed by his golden finger. And in one chapter you have with 130 points and in the next he has 129. The last straw is that this skill is only rank F. This is not hard mode it’s Your F*CKED mode. Please make a change this grind is way to long

It was a good chapter just one complaint if you are going to retell the previous chapter from another point of view please don’t end the chapter in the same place. It just makes readers feel cheated that was not progression

Your chapters don’t even rate as paragraphs and they need to actually have some plot advancement. You just posted 3 chapters and they got nowhere

Shiro please more chapters we we’re beginning to think you had been isekied

I am given you a 1 star because there are way too many flashbacks in this story, they have halted any advancement of the story and make what’s been said so far confusing

Greed is a sin and we all like sin so my answer is both plus Yasaka, Gabriel and Ingvild. [img=recommend]

Is Vali male or female because you switch back and forth so much that it’s confusing. Here let me help for males it is: He, Him, His, His, Himself. For females it is: She, Her, Her, Hers, Herself. Please try to improve this because it is maddening to read it sometimes.

It better be a cliffhanger and it better not be his transition to the next world or we are assigning you the biggest Richard award ————————————————————-____

Harem for gods sake YES

That is not true example Beware My Power by SpecterOfFire, great story and he did not let the villains monologue and also tell why you fail if you let them do so. A battle field is not a place for words it’s a place of action if you want words hold a debate.

Why do you feel the need for the MC to let the villain to monologue. The MC killed an evil dragon with out breaking a sweat. Kokabiel is not a stepping stone or temporary distraction from boredom he is a *#*t smear on the bottom of his shoe. Please don’t let the bad guys monologue your writing talent can be better used on how the MC destroys said MC.

Ignore the complainers and please post more chapters it’s a good story and we want more

Option 1 please with a side of fries thank you very much

And another great story becomes a eunuch. Such a shame

I am just waiting for someone to remember what happens when an undead is pulled into the farm space. I am i kk picturing a 2 year old baby Jon Stark apperating into the far North laughing manicley “Bwahahaha here little walker walker I have candy for you!!!!!!”

Not all dark elves are evil. Drow are evil the run the gambit just like every one else.