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What a name for the wife,.
It was confusing to read. 🥴
Up until this chapter, the story is great but there are a lot of grammar mistakes like the use of "he, she, him, her". "too" is supposed to be "two". You need an editor or maybe you just have to go back and edit it yourself. Sometimes authors tend to write anxiously because of the idea they have that might just be forgotten so grammar mistakes often happen. Anyways, there is always a space for improvement. Good luck! ✌️
We think alike,. When helping others it would always cross my mind that if one day one of my love ones needed a helping hand, i hope that someone would extend his/her helping hand as I would. I would even esp. Think of my parents,.. I always believed in karma.. 😅
Kapok?
Baba? ?
My heart is breaking apart... Wait! Wait! Jiang Yao should compose herself right now and think reasonably cause she could save her husband with her advance technology wolrd that us inside her right? And besides she is reborn with her memories intact. If im not mistaken, it was said that she was a great doctor?? Right? Okay... I could relax knowing that.. Xingzhi will be fine for sure.. Right? 😅😔😭