Typo: knowledgeable Great work so far!

Points? Potions, maybe?

attentively might also work

Typo: patients -> patience Good stuff!

Typo: excepted -> expected Keep up the good work!

Typo: born -> borne (assuming it's from "to bear", and not actually being born aka coming to life) Sweet story so far!

Just binged through the story in 3 days, definitely can see the improvement in writing from ch1 to here. Congrats on your success :)