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Alan_Adames1yrCommentedtch, weakling
The more she spoke, the more emotional she felt as Xie Xan was about to comfort her by lowering his lips. However, recalling where her mouth had been a few breaths ago, he changed the direction smoothly and kissed her forehead.- Alan_Adames1yrReplied to Moon_Winchester
to each their own lul
"Tch, you can't hog all the benefits... but, sure, I think long hair looks good, too. Maybe I can sneak in a woman's bath," he stated in a mumble while sitting down under the shade of a tree. - Alan_Adames1yrReplied to Own
It was accidental since he used sufficient force to knock out a spirit master but it turned out that it was the old village chief just disguised as the spirit master while the real spirit master was disguised as the old chief. So, the normal civilian chief died from the attack.
'Spirit masters have different Martial Souls. This one, by every performance, maybe a more cowardly Spirit Master.' Ja Sun gazed at the corpse of the chief and narrowed his eyes. - Alan_Adames1yrCommented
This novel has honestly become one of my favorite novels on here. The arc was long, but very fulfilling with it's pacing and story. Please never drop this wonderful writing. At the very least, I will definitely be here until the end.
A/N: Ooooookkkkkkkkk! Damn, all this while, I was honestly quite conflicted. A part of me wanted to drop this because I felt I made a mistake stretching Avatar this long. But the other part of me that wanted each arc to also act as a standalone won. I won't lie. Many have lost interest in this novel because of this decision but I have other novels for that. Those who remained till now, I thank you all! Love you! - Alan_Adames1yrCommented
Yeah, there's been plenty of mistakes, but it's honestly enjoyable to see you grow as a writer as I progress through the story. You're doing great!
I made so many miskates that I decided against trying to edit fgn and qm after poi is done. Man, I would seriously lose my mind. Sorry for putting you all through that. I genuinely hope the quality of my writing has improved since then. - Alan_Adames1yrCommented
people really got salty over nothing in these comments lol
Kai moved quickly, already having located the remaining two shinobi and a kunoichi who still guarded the hidden entrance in the unassuming location, and targeted the kunoichi. Kai was made to realize that kunoichi are generally more competent and focused even if not many fill the upper hierarchy of the Shinobi World. Of course, this realization came the hard way through Mito, Tsunade, Mikoto, and Kushina being badasses. - Alan_Adames1yrCommentedCh 228 The Immortal's Demise (3)
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pretty sure cuz the only ones capable of actually ending him didn't want to take his life
Killing the villains wouldn't be heroic, too… but... Japan is the country most likely to accept the death penalty for its criminals, so why not take advantage of this to avoid any future problems? - Alan_Adames1yrCommented
bro just became an Uzumaki
Curious about its appearance, Vahn tried to equip the [Enkidu] and was surprised to find that he was unable to do so. After asking Sis, she informed him that, since the item was soulbound to him, he actually just had to 'use' it like a normal item and it would bond with his soul. Following her instructions, he used [Enkidu] and felt like the inside of his body was strangely filled with limitless golden chains. Though they weren't physically there, if he focused his intent inside, he was able to feel their presence. For Vahn, it was a very strange sensation, but he also felt like the chains contained limitless power. - Alan_Adames1yrCommented
She's gonna be a very... "good girl"... isn't she...?
Hearing that they would get to eat food, the kids started looking at Vahn was reverent expressions. Seeing their 'hungry' looks, Vahn laughed and gave Anubis twice the initial amount. "Make sure they get a good meal in them." Anubis accepted the money, and Vahn flinched a bit when he got the notification that her Loyalty had increased to 85. He was slightly curious to know what would happen if he could increase it to the cap. - Alan_Adames1yrReplied to Theoritizer
I like brownies...
Afterward, Vahn sparred against Tsubaki an additional nine times, bringing their total for the day to ten. He was still unable to prevent a single attack but was slowly beginning to develop a resistance against the aftereffects of the fight. Though Vahn didn't mind being tended to by Naaza, it was slowly starting to make him feel awkward on the inside. Once, he had caught Naaza secretly sniffing at the cloth she used to wipe his sweat and it made Vahn feel a strange and numb sensation in his mind. - Alan_Adames1yrReplied to Savby_TheGamer
yup. tho it may not have been meant that way. just an unexpected name maybe
Name: Vikram Singh - Alan_Adames1yrReplied to Major_Koenig
bro, ur bootiful
Hearing the words, Vahn began to get excited and turned towards Lili to try and explain his 'revelation'... - Alan_Adames1yrReplied to Onlythree
how sad...
"Mah mah Eve, already marking down your territory huh." Rei whispered in her ear. - Alan_Adames1yrReplied to Paragen
sauce?
"Wait hold on can't she flyyyYYYYYYYYYY!!!!" Ace shouted as Rei took of flying half way through his sentence. Ace grabbed on for dear life as he swung around on the chain from all the wind that is blowing into him. - Alan_Adames1yrReplied to SpoiledSecrets
I have feeling that was the direct and incorrect translation of the purple headed pervs name
All students had different teaching methods, for example, Koji Koda had to train his voice, since he can control animals, then the power of the voice is very needed. A blow job, for example, should get the maximum number of sticky balls out of your head. - Alan_Adames1yrReplied to SungJinMori
it's to break his control over it
My control over space has also improved and my movements are fluid and fast. In addition, I can now change the space up to 5 cm from my body and maintain it for several hours. If you glue the space around you, it will look like invisible armor, and it can be broken with a blow not weaker than 400-500 kg. - Alan_Adames1yrReplied to ChopstiksmanWell, men look for pretty girls. Women are no different though. But when everyone gets older, their mindset changes to find someone responsible enough. But the first rule still applies in bedrooms no matter what age.
- Alan_Adames1yrReplied to Zheren
it's translated from Spanish, i believe. And in Spanish, the correct response to the previous statement is "Está bien", or something very similar, which when translated literally is "It's alright". And neither the editor nor the author would notice this little issue since it's grammatically correct in Spanish and still makes sense in English, although it may sound a little odd.
"" I-it's alright "" - Alan_Adames1yrCommented
oh boy, just gave away his beloved sister and he don' even know it
…If some fool wants to get in my way, then I will let him know that I Velrut Blekur is not someone that he wishes had as his enemy. It's good that Uxel is not just beautiful, she is also a smart woman capable of using other people very well… so I can entrust this to her.