it is good until U-20. I don't even know if kira is still the mc or isagi. Isagi suddenly has unlimited stamina to use metavision for long periods even though he is using it for the first time and his stamina is not that good compared to the Neo Egoist League arc when he unlocked MV for the first time in the manga. It's still a good read to pas time though.

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its a good fanfiction, but i think the connection between chapters is lacking, you should work on transitions before moving to another scene.

welcome back

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