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BrausBru10mthPostedit's good, ignore all the reviews that say "oh the MC is a moron", they're just used to mary sue protagonists who always know the right answers to everything, and are physically incapable of making mistakes because the author won't let them, here the MC actually learns and grows. the writing is shockingly good compared to the other stories on this site, and the translation is readable and inoffensive.
- BrausBru2yrCommented
remember, until this point our protagonist didn't know that this guy wanted to torture him, all he knew was that he held some killing intent.
Zhou Feng tied the storage bag to his waist and bowed to Zhao Jun's corpse. Then, he dug a hole and buried Zhao Jun. - BrausBru2yrCommented
âď¸ \[T]/
From the confidential information he received from the Nighthawks, he knew that the Sequence pathway that the Church of the Eternal Blazing Sun held was called Sun, and its Sequence 9 was Bard. It would allow the Beyonder to imbue courage and strength for themselves and their allies through their singing, a "job" that brought about devotion and submission. Their slogan was "Let us praise the Sun!" - BrausBru2yrCommented
\[T]/ PRAISE THE SUN!!!
"The next mission is for you or Frye to take Sealed Artifact 3-0782 out of town to somewhere uninhabited. Otherwise, a good half of the people in this inn will become idiots blathering praises of the Sun. Are you going first, or Frye?" Dunn looked at Klein with his deep gray eyes. - BrausBru2yrCommented
Praise the Sun!!! đ
This Sacred Emblem's Beyonder influence seemed to be able to last a long time. It had the ability to constantly purify any corpses and spirits in a fifteen-meter radius. However, it had the drawback of purifying the soul of a commoner at the same time. Research data indicated that if a normal human were to stand within its radius for an hour, they would become an idiot that only knew how to praise the Sun. The limit for Beyonders was six hours. - BrausBru2yrCommented
Also avoids the awkwardness of having these characters call him "Mr. Fool"
Ever since the ritualistic magic, Alger started using 'Him' to address The Fool politely. - BrausBru2yrCommented
Imagine spending decades mastering the blade, conversing with your peers, learning from people around the world, and forging your own style through experience and combat. then you show up to the fight and the guy just pulls out a six shooter and nails you.
"Combat? There's no need to study combat in this era." Gawain looked at Klein with turbid eyes and said in a dead voice, "You should learn how to draw your gun and shoot. You should master the most advanced weaponry." - BrausBru2yrReplied to P1N34PPL3Z
The CCP keeps any writer in China on a short leash, I'm pretty sure any negative portrayal of a secret government organization wouldn't be allowed.
"I've seen many similar situations in the past. Pass me their address, I'll ask Kenley to arrange for them to leave Tingen for another city, to start life anew." - BrausBru2yrCommented
Self defense, if he didn't kill him before the transformation ran out he would have been killed himself. The person attacking, attacked without provocation and it isn't reasonable to be expected for the defendant to have the ability to hold himself back enough to incapacitate him over killing him given the abilities of the assailant, and the recency of the acquisition of the transformation beast soul. This was justified.
While Xue Longyan was struggling to kick Han Sen, the latter ignored him and rammed his face with the cow head. It didnât take long before Xue Longyanâs body went limp. When Han Sen finally calmed down, he was already dead, with his face smashed in like a hunk of meat. - BrausBru2yrReplied to Kiti
- BrausBru2yrPosted
The story was fine up until a point. It was a relatively upbeat story about a guy exploring Buddism and interacting with people using Buddist principles. Unfortunately, the story becomes much more nationalist, and begins to defies/rewords buddist teachings to better excuse things that the nationalist writer seems to think is fine. I liked it up to a point, but then I didn't.
- BrausBru2yrCommentedCh 8 To the New World
- BrausBru2yrPosted
Really good, love the concepts so far. The only issue I had was that the MC wasn't naive enough at the beginning. He was blind ever since 7, and hospitalized since 13? There is an exactly zero percent chance he would be any good at interacting with anyone or have any good methods of understanding the unfamiliar world around him, and how does he know the basic concepts of games, like NPCs and levels? There is no way he would understand those concepts if he couldn't play many games due to his early onset blindness. There also wasn't enough of a reaction to his suddenly being able to see and walk, people cry when they are cured of their colorblindness, let alone ACTUAL BLINDNESS. I would be bawling my eyes out, and I doubt our protagonist should be an exception. Only nip picking because I love good character development, and I feel like this was missed potential