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wolfphantom

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2019-03-24 JoinedUnited States
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  • wolfphantom
    wolfphantom16d
    Posted

    not really worth the read in my opinion.. There's barley any world development and the Mc seems like an afterthought to and is barley in the story. She's like a ghost hovering in the corner of your eye. there but not really...

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    Immortal Wanderer
    Fantasy · Sumdud
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  • wolfphantom
    wolfphantom28d
    Commented

    she's not even going all out... Her armbands restrict her strength

    It was to be expected that she could keep up because the gods of DC were extremely powerful. Not only was she the daughter of Zeus, she was blessed by most of the Greek gods.
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    The Adeptus Custodes(DC)
    Anime & Comics · A_Real_Werewolf234
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  • wolfphantom
    wolfphantom1mth
    Posted

    makes no sense at all. The Mc mindset is all over the place.. It's not really worth the dying branincells trying ti read this

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    The Demiurge Larva: Kung Fu Panda / Reincarnated in Another World and
    Anime & Comics · Daoistm99JRV
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  • wolfphantom
    wolfphantom1mth
    Commented

    I'm seen a pattern here.. the further this fic goes, the more spelling errors and use of the wrong words

    For the Kree drug, things got a bit trickier after the fire contained frighteningly little information. He had no idea where this guest house was located. It seemed that, truly, very few people knew that.
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    Marvel: The Foundation
    Movies · Darkstar_crow
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  • wolfphantom
    wolfphantom1mth
    Commented

    is this like some kind of midevil modern style world????

    It was a small wooden building that was used to store some tools and equipment. I had hidden my corndogs there, wrapped in foil and tucked under a pile of blankets. I went inside without making a sound and locked the door behind me.
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    Reborn as the demon queen personal chef
    LGBT+ · K_Mopo
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  • wolfphantom
    wolfphantom1mth
    Commented

    how would she know anything about his appetite? She just me him

    I walked towards the kitchen counter with a resigned sigh. I saw a large pot of water boiling on the stove, and a basket of vegetables on the side. They looked fresh and colorful, but I knew they wouldn't be enough to satisfy the master's appetite. I decided to make a simple soup, using whatever ingredients I could find in the pantry.
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    Reborn as the demon queen personal chef
    LGBT+ · K_Mopo
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  • wolfphantom
    wolfphantom1mth
    Commented

    pinch of salt??

    The bathroom was small and simple, with a tub and a sink, and a bucket and a towel. There was no shower, no faucet, no soap, no shampoo. I had to use cold water from the bucket, and a rag from the towel, and a pinch of salt from the pot. 
    altalt
    Reborn as the demon queen personal chef
    LGBT+ · K_Mopo
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  • wolfphantom
    wolfphantom2mth
    Commented

    bug

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    Big Guardian Daddy
    Sci-fi · Wanderingcelestial
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  • wolfphantom
    wolfphantom3mth
    Commented

    iv never understood this whole scholar thing. every novel like this iv read has had some vicious family that had a grandson or son studying to be a scholar.. was that a good position back then?

    Even so, Old Tian couldn't take it. The Tian family had to provide for a scholar. They could be considered a family that cultivated and studied.
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    Spatial Farm Life: Raising My Kid, Abusing Scum, and Keeping Busy With Life
    History · Blake Curtain
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  • wolfphantom
    wolfphantom4mth
    Commented

    so he's happy that he got stuck there??? makes no sense

    It was too scary, too scary. There were wars everywhere, strong men fell everywhere, and rain of blood continued to fall every day. Wu Tian felt lucky that he had not been able to escape even though he had been in seclusion for hundreds of millions of years.
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    Prehistoric: Steady for hundreds of millions
    Anime & Comics · RYUSuke
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  • wolfphantom
    wolfphantom4mth
    Posted

    It feels more like a game run-through than a story.. There's not really a world description nor a build-up of anything, and the writing reads kinda choppy to me.. other than a few more minor issues I have with this story, it's a meh kinda of story to me. one that I'd read if I was waiting on other story updates...

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    Percy Jackson: the dark souls survivor
    Video Games · Scathach_
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  • wolfphantom
    wolfphantom4mth
    Commented

    I'm going with both

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    Rick in Marvel and DC: Fusion
    Movies · harsh07
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  • wolfphantom
    wolfphantom4mth
    Commented

    the more I read, the bigger the urge is to drop this

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    Rick in Marvel and DC: Fusion
    Movies · harsh07
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  • wolfphantom
    wolfphantom4mth
    Commented

    went from windbreaker to trench coats.. thugs mow sporting morphing cloths..

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    Rick in Marvel and DC: Fusion
    Movies · harsh07
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  • wolfphantom
    wolfphantom4mth
    Commented

    by all rights he should he dead l. he was facing away from the ghoul

    Kyle recovers from the slash and takes out his saber, the menacing ghoul looks at Kyle and throws out another slash aiming for his neck.
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    The Invincible Full-Moon System
    Fantasy · Mrboogey13
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  • wolfphantom
    wolfphantom5mth
    Commented

    how could it be the best in the world if it has last generation equipment

    Diana was surprised by this, this hospital was the largest in all of Europe, equipped with the best machines and the best doctors in the world.
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    DC: Spirit of Vengeance
    Anime & Comics · Tio_Iroh99
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  • wolfphantom
    wolfphantom5mth
    Commented

    it's like every meal has dumplings in it

    A few minutes later, I returned to the kitchen to cook a substantial amount of food. I was starving. I opened the fridge and assessed my options. After a brief search, I grabbed a large bag of frozen dumplings. I intended to devour them all.
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    The Laziest System: Sign-Up System
    Anime & Comics · Ryusenka
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  • wolfphantom
    wolfphantom5mth
    Commented

    how does that work a price but no market???

    This kind of thing was not considered rare among the descendants of aristocratic families, but it was never leaked out. To ordinary people, it was a good thing that had a price but no market.
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    Blacksmiths Are Weak? My Artifact Spirit Wives Help Me Dominate the World
    Games · I'm Not A Leek
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  • wolfphantom
    wolfphantom6mth
    Commented

    have no idea who that is

    We reached the kids and i introduced myself as i noticed we haven't done that due to the adrenaline filled stupor yet "Hi, i am Peter Parker" the blonde turns towards me "these two are bang and Susan..." She points to the boy and girl beside her and then turn to me as she says "...and i am Billie eilish."
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    Friendly Neighborhood Youtuber Spider-man
    Movies · KamBroFam123ERT
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  • wolfphantom
    wolfphantom6mth
    Commented

    how would the surroundings be going dim his workshop is in the sewers

    Hours passed as Asher remained engrossed in his work, the surrounding environment growing dim as evening turned into night. He reached for a pair of headphones and his phone, playing a rhythmic tune(lofi of course) to help him focus and let the natural flow guide his movements.
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    DC: with D&D Artificer
    TV · Lythan_Page
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