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I think Selene's and Lia's ones were the ones from the clothing company.
Well this came out of nowhere, does anyone have a clue as to who this might be?
Sounds good to me! If superman can fool people with just his glasses then a half mask is more than enough but he does need to change his voice.
this caught all of us off guard 😅
She thinks Selene and Aether were a thing, you know when he told her about his ex at the engagement party.
The pace is a bit slow imo but with so many characters to introduce it can't be anything but slow. I would rather you build the foundations properly then pick up the pace. A few adult chapters sprinkled here and there, can't go wrong with that. I think its better to wait a little more before crossing the final line but with there being many adult characters and not having a single adult chapter does feel a bit weird. Just don't sacrifice the light hearted rom-com elements for the adult ones because of some weird genre obligations. Anyway these are just my thoughts on the matter but you're the pro so take what you will, I like the story so far and I'll stick around for the future all well.
Steel you heart boy, he is just getting what he deserves. Finally Selene stepped up her game and showed everyone who she loves.
She doesn't know it but the maid a swifty in heart.
This feels like a cop out. Just a few glances?! Really?! After what he said the consequences should have been much worse for him, unless I'm misreading this and the principal didn't completely heard what he said.
As a wise man once said - perfectly balanced, as all things should be. This seems like a system which forces its host to remain themselves without leaning to either sides, right in the middle. Usually the system corrupts the host with unreasonable missions and demands (not saying this one also doesn't improve the arcane's will on aether), still it's a different take on the system aspect of the story and I'm all for it. TFTC
It's alright man we are all human. I'm actually more surprised how you always manage to address the MC as either Aether or Ether for different characters correctly.