original Zoro don't talk and think about every move this much, he is Zoro not Usopp. When I start reading this I had hope that this novel will be BIG ACTION but it isn't. thanks for this . I wish You good luck

I'm fan of this novel,have really huge potential :)A bit of criticism: Too much thought over each move, the reader should do it himself, building the main character should be based on his actions and his thoughts but you do not need to explain every move ;)

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