I do feel ya (and sorry for the late response to this), but well, I'm simply not the best at writing romance if I'll be honest I've always kind of put it more into the background, not trying to focus on it too much, so maybe that made me skip over a lot of important things. It's been noted though, I will try to maybe expand upon their relationship and its growth in the future!
I did not know that! Interesting!
Thanks for the tip about the striker, I'll have to check it out! And don't worry about the necromancy bit, I'm going to try and make it as unique as possible! It's going to become more unique throughout the 'Legacy' progression, so at the start it might be a bit more generic, but it will be more fine-tuned toward Foster's own personality and interests later on! :D
Oh, simple He just didn't intend to actually hurt him, he just tried to take out his anger for a second In this kinda world with stats, levels, as well as health and stuff, if one wasn't able to kind of control that sort of thing, then a high-level person bumping into a child on the street might end up killing them instantly
I see, I get what you mean! I'll try and make the emotions of the characters a bit more apparent from now on!
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Hello there! A shameless Author self-review, like everyone on this site does! I think this story is going to be really good, but you know, I kinda have to think that! It might be a bit slow for some of you, especially at the start, but it's going to pick up, don't worry! I hope you'll have fun reading! :D