you hated him and I have no problem with that. However, I find it disappointing that the MC deliberately questions and provokes a school kid's actions. You are the author of this story; you can make him behave like an irrational idiot. It wasn't his will to keep hitting even though the MC told him to stop. You wrote it that way, and you seem to blame him for being aggressive when it's as clear as day that the MC provoked him. What the MC did is essentially the same as what Shido (the evil teacher) did by manipulating the situation and highlighting others' shortcomings to gain sympathy and justify his argument as a good person. If you hate him, I don't have a problem with that, but in justifying your actions, you also make the MC look pathetic.

The poor writing makes it seem like the author is just boasting to justify their reason for making the readers hate that character. Unfortunately, it only makes me feel like the MC become cheap. If the author is getting lazy and just wants to gain sympathy from the female characters by turning other MC into an antagonist, maybe it's time for me to stop reading for a while

That should be a significant and intriguing conflict in the story, but unfortunately, the author just summarizes it in one paragraph.

I don't know what the purpose of all this is. It's a zombie-themed story, but zombies are no longer the issue. It's just a repetition of his journey, searching for gold and jewelry, from walking and stealing from houses to driving a tank to rob a bank.

the quality and quantity of this story become worse to the point where I hardly understand what they talking about

why he suddenly became so cringe

yeah I also hate being a salaryman, but it's still far much better than become jobless

because this fanfic not light novel or anime

he need to call his ability to use it?

actually I never read light novel or watch any anime that have system, most anime or light novel just use simple game interface with no missions or shop

500k good 👍 don't to give him too much money without a clear origin.

I thought he will start lone hunting macabre 😔 if author intended to change the canon and make it full OC or AU, it time for me to leave. because I hardly have any good experience read fanfic with dozen OC well it's just my personal preference so keep doing what you want about this story 👍

this like vomit sounds effects

She can only hope that cat not eat her corpse

The conversation is a bit clunky to read, and it might be better not to write the full character names in every paragraph.

currently read ch 20 At first, I was quite interested in this story, especially from its synopsis where the author uses characters from a famous anime. But it was a deception because this is cing cong paradise. Wich The anime is mediocre; cultivation is the peak argument. The story is heavily imbued with Chinese cultivation item nonsense so if you're expecting a Naruto fanfic mixed with other anime, you'll be disappointed. it's just sinopsis scam Plus, most of the material isn't clear where it's sourced from. I hope the author adds a cultivation tag so I don't have to taste this poison beforehand.

well actually Japan not even top 10 countries with highest suicide rate, the highest is countries around Africa with Rusia and Korea

I like that the main character isn't driven by lust. Honestly, I'm tired of stories filled with explicit scenes. I hope this story develops further before the female characters Fall for mc

doctor never tell patient how long they will survive or when most likely they will die.

this kind a sound effects or what? sometimes this thing keep showing up and I'm not sure what but it's feel gross Chinese nonsense