See this! I just gifted the story: Ice cola

Quite a fast paced story but I liked it. A few more details would have been appreciated in some cases… like his family past and background but it was a good one. Good job and good luck to the writer.[img=coins][img=coins]

It’s not bad, maybe a bit too fast paced and some more details would be more than welcome about family background, planet / continent and major powers, at least some initial introduction for starters. I kinda like the Mc tho, he’s not rushing too much and uses his brain but too many things are kept in the shadow (back to details I already mentioned), would like to know more about the “cheat system” itself too and how those skills (… martial art, body s. Tecniques etc…) are coming from … origin/acquired/found/whatever. Aaand where is the harem!!! Haha jkjk Would like to know how story proceeds for sure so added to library and looking forward to it. [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]

See this! I just gifted the story: Ice cola