Fingers crossed this one makes it through. Well written and it flows very well. I think there are interesting possibilities for the characters

Really interesting plot, not your usual instant love story. Good character development and interesting multi plot start to what I hope will continue on into a great read!

See this! I just gifted the story: Massage chair

I'm enjoying this so far. I really hope it gets picked. It's so annoying when you really like one of these trial reads and they don't continue... sigh....