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- UzuShiro5mthCommentedCh 408 Chapter 404 : Hiruzen's Headache
- UzuShiro6mthCommentedCh 387 Chapter 384 : Explosions!
- UzuShiro6mthCommentedCh 147 Iam Sick
- UzuShiro8mthPosted
buena historia, amplia bastante el lore de harry potter y no se centra en escenarios ya quemados y repetidos hasta el extremo, casi no se nota la influencia china asíque buen trabajo traduciendo y adaptando. ayuda mucho que no tenga ningun sistema, eso siempre arruina los ff. ¿Alguna recomendación para algo similar?
- UzuShiro8mthCommentedCh 113 0113 Mysterious Domain
- UzuShiro8mthCommentedCh 112 0112 Temples and Murals
- UzuShiro8mthCommented
como sabe que creo una espada y que no la ha heredado?
"So, you can even craft Valyrian Blades. That's great. Now you are definitely worthy to be one of us."- Daemon laughingly said to Arthur. Arthur grinned at him and replied, "As a member of one of the top powerhouse in Valyria, I know how to make one. It's sad that Targaryens didn't have access to that knowledge." - UzuShiro8mthCommentedCh 3 Four Years Later
- UzuShiro8mthCommented
te estas olvidando de Asuma, el tambien era un usuario de viento.
On the 21st day of his vacation, Fujin made his way to the library. On the road, he thought about a lot of wind style jutsu. His thoughts were, 'Finally I'll be starting with wind release jutsu. In the series, Wind was probably the least powerful element. Though Naruto had wind nature, all he used was Rasenshuriken. Temari did have a lot of jutsu, but she used a giant fan! Kakuzu used Pressure Damage, which was very lethal. I think there was also Great Breakthrough used by Orochimaru and probably Gale Palm used by someone. And lastly, Danzo used his vacuum jutsu, which were very lethal. Sadly, other than Temari, no one else specialized in Wind jutsu. And the number of wind jutsu were very low too. - UzuShiro8mthReplied to AzureConqueror
creo que no estas teniendo en cuenta la geopolitica de las naciones elementales, crees que konoha tomaria una postura beligerante poco despues de el fin de la guerra y el ataque del kyubi? lo mas probable a nivel politico es que kumo presionara a la hoja con sus alianzas con iwa para que entregaran a hiashi, no creo que konoha se pueda permitir una escalada en las agresiones fronterizas demostrando aun mas lo debil que estan y destruyendo la fachada que mantienen. lo que hizo Hiruzen fue lo correcto, konoha no podia permitirse otra guerra.
I guess the next event would be an attempt by Kumo to kidnap Hinata and the death of Hizashi. That move from Kumo does make some sense. With Minato dead, Orochimaru defected and the remaining 2 sannins not present in the village. Then again, giving Hizashi to them was really spineless of Hiruzen. - UzuShiro11mthPosted
The author does not know the nasuverse lore or ignores it on purpose, this fanfic does not make sense, the characters do not act as they should in fate and many of the things do not make sense, here is an example, he talks about shirou's magic circuits when they are They are in the soul and since he is a reincarnated his soul could not have any, then it gets more absurd being a demi-servant with Emiya's saint-graph, and all this in 7 chapters.
- UzuShiro11mthCommented
archer? and Gilgamesh?
"Tsk. You actually summoned me," a male voice, sounding rather unhappy and rude, spoke in Shirou's ear. - UzuShiro11mthReplied to TonyorobskyCh 3 Chapter 3
- UzuShiro11mthCommentedCh 1 Chapter 1