what?

good story concept different from other author dxd fanfiction where they always make mc is devil or mashup a lot other anime in one world. Congratulation not becoming one of the author from the above it mean you different from the other author who only know to copypast a bunch different power from other anime pass it into their mc to boost their power.

it good story but i dont understand what ninjutsu or skill he use because there no translation

that weird as far i know white flash die because of suicide because village conspiracy

wow this is actually very good story

do alchemy can make golem?

what this guy age

who the is this person

it weird because i usually i read story where mc is powerful but this story really about mc monologue a whole chapter it like reading a diary.

The intro fell lacking maybe you should have small background intro like what happen to mc not straight to main plot.

new story bookmark first and read again after couple more chapter release

lot of typo and it like I am reading essay rather than reading the story and lack of content

the heck so many typo

Even if you try to change these bullies will always want to drag you down as someone who has been bullied since kindergarten try to make friends with bully targeting you so much harder than you thought it would be

I simply don't like powerful mc in parties because it makes the female feel like she's mooching off the mc because she's gorgeous.

religion maybe the most mystery why they still exist until today

???

maybe you can use grammar bot to fix it

i guess he really let out all off his frustrating

I believe magicians employ tricks.