i feel like Itachi will awaken his 3 tomoe on this mission which isn't what I want to see until he is at least 9 or 10.

Being in a kid's body has nothing to do with immaturity; maturity comes with experience. I suppose a bit of impulsiveness and hardheadedness could be caused by being a child because of all those raging testosterone levels, but that too should only happen when a kid enters puberty and not to a 7-year-old.

I was just about to tell you to slow down on the releases. They are too frequent. Impulsive releases can make it harder to rewrite things later and can also make you burn out pretty quickly. Even 1 per day is a very fast rate, but it works if you have a clear goal for the story in mind and you are only at the beginning phase of your story; otherwise, it's better to be about 10–20 chapters ahead in private chapters than public ones because if 20 chapters later you realize you missed some detail or if you want to add a piece of world-building or mystery hint that can be revealed 20 chapters later to make the story more engaging, you will be able to modify the public chapters before release. .............................................................................................................................................

head or hand?

I always thought meteors would be quite common in the world of one piece because about 80–90% of the planet is basically just water and the only land which looks like it reaches the depths of the sea seems to be the red line which divides the entire planet in two parts. So the only possible ways to form islands spread out across the entire planet would be large meteorites because volcanic eruptions and techtonic movements would be too deep in the ocean to ever be able to form islands capable enough to clump together to form kingdoms as big as we have seen in the series. Another possibility is that during the formation of the planet, there were a single or at most two large landmasses on the planet that were completely destroyed or shattered through the use of devil fruit abilities of the ancient weapons later on to form small islands. **That last line I wrote is my hypothesis on the void century. A war big enough that changed the entire map of the planet using devil fruits and ancient weapons. Also explains how the poneglyphs got scattered throughout the world. .............................................................................................................................................

Ohhh you mean angels and god being dead and stuff. okay got it. I misunderstood your comment. my bad

I think that can have deadly consequences. Ainz, because of his new body, doesn't feel much emotion and is basically quite cruel and heartless to anyone not from Nazarick. I believe it is possible he might kill, imprison, or inslave Thoth upon hearing the truth from him.

I really like the story so far and am looking forward to the next chapter.

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Dude learn to make smaller sentences!!

Ah, the thing I was afraid of is happening in yet another novel I like. 7-year-olds defeat a Jonin commander, and soon multiple Jonins left and right, I bet. 7-year-old Uchiha awakened two tomoe Sharigan out of thin air with no mental stress or trauma. 7-year-old Hyuga with enough chakra to perform multiple shadow clones. 7-year-old uzukami who can use multiple chakra natures and 20+ shadow clones, as well as uzumaki kekkei genkai, is already jonin level in ninjutsu and taijutsu, and can also use sealing techniques powerful enough to trap a freaking jonin commander of a village. It feels like all of them, or at least two of them, will easily reach Kage level before or by the age of 10 and even kill a village elder like Danzo with no consequences. I had high hopes. I still do but I am not sure If it will stay that way after 10-20 chapters. Welp I am looking forward to the next release and I do hope some things be edited out later on but oh well these are all jusy my personal opinions.

It feels like the last two chapters, or at least this chapter, weren't written by the original author at all. Kaito's attitude feels a bit inconsistent in this chapter. The interaction between the characters feels monotonous, and even Shikaku, for some reason, felt OOC. The team introduction part was a complete copy of Naruto's team introduction setup. We have seen introductions take place in yakiniku, ichiraku, or other places, so copying the exact thing from Naruto's team felt a bit out of place. Also, not a single interaction between the Genin teams that graduated along with their own doesn't feel like a proper buildup. Interaction with some OCs that graduated with them would have been great. Maybe even getting to know some strong teams would have been better for some world-building. We don't have any information on their classmates or the people they graduated with. Introducing some promising OCs would have been nice. like an ino shika cho trio or an aburame, maybe even a hyuga from the branch family. Someone from the Kurama clan would also have been a nice addition. Maybe some talented orphan as well, or some completely new clan that wasn't in the canon. Just saying that if you only include people who are in the canon, then you will only limit the story to these characters in the future.

Not sure if he is thinking to himself or talking out loud. If he is talking out loud then he has definitely lost his mind lol.

I thought he was more mature than that. Maybe he could have included this all in an internal monologue and given a normal answer outwardly. Especially the part about hinting his animosity towards Danzo so openly and aggressively when there is no reason that he can publicly justify himself with.

It should be "Itachi's eyes followed" and not "Kaito's eyes followed".

If he doesn't know if Shikaku is currently the jonin commander or not, why did he ask, "Aren't you the jonin commander?". If he was not the Jonin commander yet, then he would question Kaito about why he thinks that he is the Jonin commander.

These 12 cheats are unbelievably OP in the world of one piece I tell ya.

roger, shanks, garp, rayleigh, mihawk, oden, zoro, jinbei, sanji, heck even koby.

The guy is literally born as a celestial dragon. that's like platinum spoon at birth. on top of that he had observation haki before birth. what the frick are you on about? lol