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  • dalekrule
    dalekrule1yr
    Posted

    Highly do not recommend. The characters are pretty much one dimensional, and the world building suffers from that heavily. The biggest problem though, its grammar. This pains me to say, but unfortunately, this is unreadable if English is your first language. Will you technically be able to read it? Sure. If you're used to reading novels MTLed around 2017, you'll be fine. The grammar does not improve over time however, and I guess this is just the unfortunate case of author likely not being a native speaker of English. If you read the first chapter, you have a good idea of what the rest of them will look like grammar wise.

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    MMORPG: Rebirth as an Alchemist
    Games · MiuNovels
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  • dalekrule
    dalekrule1yr
    Replied to swift221

    Tbh you should read to end of volume 2. Trust me. It has a slightly slow start, but once you get through the introduction chapters, it takes off. It's a huge arc, which keeps the intensity of V1 while being much larger in scale. I can't tell you anything about V3, because it's clear to me that this book is best read one volume at a time, so I'll wait for V3 to finish.

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    Shadow Slave
    Fantasy · Guiltythree
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  • dalekrule
    dalekrule1yr
    Posted

    This is one of the few books I've seen that execute impossibly difficult adventures in grand fashion. The author doesn't tell you the journey was hard, he makes you experience it with the characters every step of the way. The arcs are not short, but no other novel on this site comes close to executing epic-scale arcs so well.

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    Shadow Slave
    Fantasy · Guiltythree
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  • dalekrule
    dalekrule1yr
    Replied to GRIM_LORD

    OP's effective claim is that translators are shoving in fake paragraphs to increase word count, so that readers need to pay more to unlock.

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    I Become An NPC That Can Do Infinite Job Changes
    Games · Pumpkin Mine
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  • dalekrule
    dalekrule1yr
    Posted

    I love system menus... I don't like seeing constant massive useless system menus. I don't really have much of a problem with the story, but wow, this is the first story to give me fatigue from reading system notifs.

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    Hero of Darkness
    Fantasy · CrimsonWolfAuthor
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  • dalekrule
    dalekrule2yr
    Commented

    ???? You mean reaction??? Not erection right???

    Based on his erection, he wasn't complaining one bit by this treatment.
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    Supremacy Games
    Sci-fi · MidGard
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  • dalekrule
    dalekrule2yr
    Commented

    Kai'sa????

    It was called Void Seekers!
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    Supremacy Games
    Sci-fi · MidGard
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  • dalekrule
    dalekrule2yr
    Posted

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    Samsara Online
    Games · XIETIAN
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  • dalekrule
    dalekrule2yr
    Commented

    Who said this line? (Author clarification would be great here)

    "Hahahahaha! Behold, you fools! This is the power of science! No one can surpass the greatest invention that our state has ever created! Embrace its might and worship its perfection, for you are witnessing the ascension of our new god!"
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    The Mech Touch
    Sci-fi · Exlor
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  • dalekrule
    dalekrule2yr
    Commented

    Ugh, but why is he provoking them when he can resolve it properly. Author doesn't like the "ability hiding" trope to generate fake hype, but this is even worse fake hype.

    This chapter has been deleted.
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    DELETING
    Action · Awespec
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  • dalekrule
    dalekrule2yr
    Posted

    Past 50-60 chapters (~ch 70 to ~130) showed an issue: The author doesn't know how to make story arcs actually develop. Things happen, but nothing seems to have progressed. MC is in the same spot, except some inconsequential events happened (i.e. you could skip them, and the story would still be fine). Oh yeah, this author seems to have taken away the MC's ability to think for himself. Asking the guy in his ring about knowledge he doesn't know is one thing, having the MC ask the guy about decisions he should be making himself is another.

    altalt
    Walker Of The Worlds
    Eastern · Grand_Void_Daoist
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  • dalekrule
    dalekrule2yr
    Replied to TheActualGod

    Nope. he just dropped the story to write something else, based on his reddit activity.

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    Rise of the Godking
    Fantasy · KillerHemboy
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  • dalekrule
    dalekrule2yr
    Commented

    This luck is way too good no? Not a problem w/ me tho.

    As Ves and Ranya paid close attention, the small exobeasts body suddenly began to blur!
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    The Mech Touch
    Sci-fi · Exlor
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  • dalekrule
    dalekrule2yr
    Posted

    Solid plot, world building, and dialogue. Where the novel truly shines in my opinion, is the characters though. Hope to see how the novel develops in the future.

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    A Bored Lich
    Fantasy · Random_writer
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  • dalekrule
    dalekrule2yr
    Replied to Avan

    Author-san, why would you 4 star your own novel. 5 star your own at least XD

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    Earth's Greatest Magus
    Fantasy · Avan
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  • dalekrule
    dalekrule2yr
    Replied to Devils_Advocate

    For reference, chapter 100 is soon after the first quest arc begins (92). I'm actually feeling the same thing as the reviewer. The issue is that filler description (i.e. it won't impact anything later on, nor does it improve the depth of the world) is taking up the majority of the chapter space, so the story is grinding along too slowly.

    altalt
    Darius Supreme
    Fantasy · Kotario
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  • dalekrule
    dalekrule2yr
    Commented

    Kinda interested if it can be transmuted back to full durability after use.

    Description: An item forged by the God Hephaestus as a gift for Asmodeus. The dagger has the ability to end the life of anyone struck by it that is not a God, regardless of the victim's strength or the wielder's weakness. However, it will shatter after repeated use if not wielded by Asmodeus himself.]
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    Darius Supreme
    Fantasy · Kotario
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  • dalekrule
    dalekrule2yr
    Replied to Carefreedude

    Short answer: it doesn't update frequently enough to amass enough activity, and activity is the best way to get power stones.

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    A Bored Lich
    Fantasy · Random_writer
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  • dalekrule
    dalekrule2yr
    Commented

    Hi Author, you're probably looking for "feminine" rather than "feminist" here. (Feminist is a political term, and definitely out of place here)

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    Supremacy Games
    Sci-fi · MidGard
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  • dalekrule
    dalekrule2yr
    Commented

    Yep, he could've avoided this entire thing by showing his fake cultivation immediately.

    "Senior!!! Senior please forgive me!!! I made a horrible and tremendous mistake." Duan Shu's brain worked fast as he thought about utilizing the moment when Long Chen's anger was focused on the girl. He started begging for forgiveness as tears kept falling from his eyes. 
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    Rise of the Demon God
    Eastern · Demonic_angel
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