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Plothoel

Plothoel

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To survive is to find a meaning in suffering.

2019-02-26 JoinedAruba
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  • Plothoel
    Plothoel1yr
    Posted

    Useless info dump. First 20 chapters are mostly systems talking, showing skills and df he doesn't even choose in detail. Plot? What plot? The author himself admitted he have no idea what he is writing.

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  • Plothoel
    Plothoel1yr
    Replied to SleepySolstice

    Besides, you're assuming that normal people would just bring gun everywhere they go. Which I guarantee you that isn't the case. And just because someone bring a gun, doesn't mean they are willing or ready to get into a gun fight. Most ordinary people would choose to flee if they could instead of getting into shooting match. That just common sense. Unless if you're police/military or the kind of guy that spend his weekend on firing range.

    Now, Hector was not against having guns, he was all for it, that's what made America what it was. But it needed more regulation. For fuck's sake, you can have a gun at 18 but not alcohol?
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    Marvel: Mr. President [COMPLETE]
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  • Plothoel
    Plothoel1yr
    Replied to

    Say that to school children, they would be glad to be able to bring their own gun to defend themselves in annual firing season at school. US regulations about 'riffle' is a joke. That's not counting illegal channels and surprisingly stupid parents that have guns lying around so their children can bypass the hurdle of regulation in the first place. And yep, not perfect world indeed. But arming more people isn't the answer imo.

    Now, Hector was not against having guns, he was all for it, that's what made America what it was. But it needed more regulation. For fuck's sake, you can have a gun at 18 but not alcohol?
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    Marvel: Mr. President [COMPLETE]
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  • Plothoel
    Plothoel1yr
    Replied to SleepySolstice

    Yes, I didn't say the crime using other weapons are lower, what Im trying to say is, No strict gun law just make it easier to get gun for psycho whose going nuts. And If I have to choose between fighting or escaping a man with a knife and a kid with uzi, I chose a man with a knife every single time. Unless if you live in America I guess, where the 'good guy' also brings gun. But that didn't seem to work, considering the amount of gun related massacre happening there every years.

    Now, Hector was not against having guns, he was all for it, that's what made America what it was. But it needed more regulation. For fuck's sake, you can have a gun at 18 but not alcohol?
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    Marvel: Mr. President [COMPLETE]
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  • Plothoel
    Plothoel1yr
    Commented

    I told you already, she is deus ex macina

    "Who is that?" Odin asks Thor, as he could feel that his newest guest was extremely powerful.
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  • Plothoel
    Plothoel1yr
    Commented

    She is called deus ex machina.

    "Who was that?" Tony asks as he walks over, dragging the carcass of the Destroyer behind him.
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  • Plothoel
    Plothoel1yr
    Commented

    Swordswaller, because the dragon prone to burn sword or any pointy stick, because he has a trauma of pointy stick stuck inside of him.

    I already have an image of what those dragons could be, even a name, but maybe you can come up with a better name. note, and this is important, please suggests name that is either a twisted english(like Seasmoke, or Silverwing) or Valyrian name(Vermithor, Balerion).
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    House of The Dragon: Reincarnated as Daemon Targaryen's Son
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  • Plothoel
    Plothoel1yr
    Replied to idiotic_writer

    Make it extra spicy by creating new side, and choose pink or rainbow as color that represent them :v

    "I know. I was also thinking about marrying Helaena to Aegon. But when your father proposed this match, I was convinced by it. Aegon will marry Laena Velaryon firstborn."
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    House of The Dragon: Reincarnated as Daemon Targaryen's Son
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  • Plothoel
    Plothoel1yr
    Replied to Swarthy

    Which thread? Oh sorry, can't read it because you just keep deleting anything that have even the slightest hint that disagree with you. And, hey don't need to attack me like that. That really my little feelings XD and welcome to internet, you free to post your story, I free to read it and critique it. Or you can free to quit writing if you can't handle criticism? And I to learn write my own story mayhap? Lol

    "No fucking way!?"
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    MCU: Skull and Bones
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  • Plothoel
    Plothoel1yr
    Replied to Swarthy

    Swarthy, that not the phrase you're using on your argument before. You're making questions about how could he possibly smuggling weapon through airport security, which then lead to my statement, how stupid it is, that a hydra agent can't smuggle a weapon through airport security. If the mc is smart enough to kill a hydra grunt that was sent to watch him in Korea, and get away with it, without any repercussions from hydra. Then how he can't smuggle a gun through a freaking airport security? And from whom exactly are you trying to hide this SECRET assignment from exactly? Hydra? Congratulations, he failed spectacularly. Shield? Hydra is under their nose and they don't know anything about it.

    "No fucking way!?"
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    MCU: Skull and Bones
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  • Plothoel
    Plothoel1yr
    Replied to Swarthy

    Calling people idiots doesn't make your previous argument less stupid. Seriously, hydra agent can't find a way to smuggling a weapon through airport?

    "No fucking way!?"
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    MCU: Skull and Bones
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  • Plothoel
    Plothoel1yr
    Replied to Swarthy

    this argument is stupid and you know it, doesn't have to defend every mistake mc made, that just turn him into gary stu that cant do wrong. love the story far.

    "No fucking way!?"
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  • Plothoel
    Plothoel1yr
    Replied to Se7en

    try questionable questing or spacebattle. the reviews in there definitely definitely more encouraging and helpful than this site.

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  • Plothoel
    Plothoel1yr
    Commented

    When did thanos come knocking on the dwarves?

    The Dwarves of Nidavellir are an ancient race of skilled forgers and blacksmiths who are ruled by King Eitri. They are close allies of the Asgardians, and after being asked by Odin they created the mighty weapon That's currently next to Peter's nightlight, Mjølnir.
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    I'm Spider-Man (MCU)
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  • Plothoel
    Plothoel1yr
    Posted

    Story start at warring state period, and just basically skip it. And then there is the politics that doesn't really make sense to me, but then again even rl politics is just bunch of nonsense to me most of the time. the beginning of the story, which start as many other isekai story, meet God > get wish/system > profit You trying to make more realistic fanfiction of naruto? At least make it like you try, not just following a tropes. Because it just seems like a lazy writing to me.

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    Naruto - Blue Droplets (ENG) version
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  • Plothoel
    Plothoel1yr
    Posted

    This review is based solely in fact there is no otsusuki. Because kisimoto clearly high when writing those Shit clan as a Canon and making it a big plot line.

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    Naruto : Tales of Obito Uchiha
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  • Plothoel
    Plothoel1yr
    Commented

    Ororo attack abomination using Thunder, it super effective. Abomination has fallen asleep? Isn't it supposed to paralyse? Wrong franchise?

    *Zzzzzzzzzz*
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  • Plothoel
    Plothoel1yr
    Commented

    Honestly, I still can't understand how blonski turn to hulk copycat. I meant, the dude just inject Bruce blood and whatever chemical juice mix in it and BAM, you got discounted Hulk.

    "Just do it already!" Blonsky answers back in annoyance.
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  • Plothoel
    Plothoel1yr
    Posted

    Standard webnovel stuff. Could definitely be improved, but the author doesn't even bother to correct a grammar in fist few chapters. Guess he just writing for fun, which is fine. The story is kinda wish fulfilment, and the characters doesn't have enough depth for me to care about them. And of course there is sprinkle of smut here and there too keep the horny teenagers entertain.

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    Journey Towards Greatness
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  • Plothoel
    Plothoel1yr
    Replied to Overlord_1000

    You just said yggdrasil which is a game are more dangerous than NW which is a real world. I find it funny because that's like saying gta v are more dangerous than a real world. If you live there sure, but when you just playing it as a player? What the danger lol.

    Their Strongest member, A 200 year old Vampire Lord, Evileye, is only near level 55.
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