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It’s a matter of logic, I don’t intend to ‘force’ anyone. In your opinion does it make any sense that one of the 12 great families can’t find out about this guy’s power level and even just his presence when he is going by his real name and hasn’t even used any disguise etc. Does it make sense that his Grandfather who is supposedly a step away from transcendance, didn’t even consider the fact that Max was a part of the conflict on the train and didn’t suspect a single thing. Them not finding out about his status while in the forest made perfect sense, but no mention of any rumors/suspicions arising when he is in their hometown their HQ is a bit too silly for me. It would’ve made sense if the entire family or atleast the head of fam i.e. grandfather was a heartless bastard who doesn’t give a single f*** about his useless trash grandson or if Max used a disguise or atleast kept a lower profile. However, none of these scenarios have played out. You wouldn’t leave your fam and travel by train all the way to the edge of civilization looking for someone if you don’t care about them, plus the scene where he fondly describes Max to the butler. As opposed to your belief my comment was not thoughtless and pushy and I actually waited quite a bit before saying what I did, because I felt like the coincidentally not finding out thing was going overboard, like some third rate trope in a shounen manga/anime. Your complain would’ve been valid if I said something that hurt the story’s direction or demanded a change in a characters personality, like who should be Max’s gf or how a situation is resolved (eg whether Max being paranoid regarding his family is right/wrong) or for example whether Max transcends to a higher realm or not. Unlike the things I’ve mentioned what I said was something which was hurtIng the logic and integrity of plot points established by author himself.
Dear author, it’s been a great story till now and even though I’ve read LOADS of Webnovel stories, this is the first one I got privileged for because I just couldn’t wait. Just one plot poInt has REALLLYYY bothered me, his family still not finding out about him and his abilities. Considering how high profile he has been. Max just killed someone from his family. If his parents still don’t find out about him I’m gonna quit. Just wanted to put it out there. Thanks.