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honey20002mthCommentedRepeat of paragraph? [img=faceslap]
Gabe, keeping a firm grip on the situation, responded, "Ari, I need you to stay calm. We're working on getting out of this. Just trust me, okay?"- honey20002mthCommented
Too much repeats
"Easy there, Bella," Ian murmured, his voice a comforting whisper. He settled her back into the car, sliding in beside her, never letting go of her hands. The interior of the car cocooned them in a momentary sanctuary from the outside world. - honey20002mthCommented
So much repeated paragraphs.
Isabella sat in the back seat of the car, her eyes wide and unblinking, still reeling from the near miss of the accident. As Ian opened the car door, he realized that the girl seemed to be in shock. Gently, he moved towards her, taking hold of Isabella's trembling hands. She jerked at the simple touch and almost fell off her seat before she looked up to see Ian with glassy and haunted eyes. - honey20004mthCommented
I m angry with this author! Too much repeats!
Alexander had indeed occupied an important place in her heart, but the Miller Group and her parents were also important to her. In fact, it was obvious that she would choose the latter. - honey20004mthCommented
Why are ryou repeating what was written in the last chapter again? This is unethical. I m paying twice for the same para! For how many times already!
Sophia was preparing herself to be exposed. - honey20004mthCommented
the e? was?
After all, the e was swallowed by the dog, and the dog was now missing. No one would believe such a story. - honey20004mthCommented
Not Sophia
After all, it had been her carelessness that had caused her to fall into such an embarrassing situation.She lowered her head dejectedly and asked, "Easton, why do you think that it was me who leaked the design?" - honey20004mthCommented
A woman but refered to as a 'he' through out this chapter?
A fat middle-aged woman squeezed in from behind Taylor.It was evident that he was her agent. - honey20004mthCommented
Bella wanted to explain....
Sophia wanted to explain, but looking at Grace's sharp eyes, she began choking on her words. - honey20004mthCommented
Are we paying for the writer's long and repeated msg at the end of each chapters?
I wanted to take a moment to express my heartfelt gratitude for your support and for reading my book so far. It means the world to me to have readers like you who appreciate and enjoy my work. - honey20001yrCommented
Barker now changed to Lambert?
Then, she spoke mechanically, "Mr. Lambert, I think you misunderstood. Someone knocked me out, and I was already here when I woke up. Moreover, I was also drugged! I was attacked at the entrance of the old mansion. You can check the surveillance, and I can go to the hospital for a check-up to prove that I'm a victim too. As for why you were drugged, it has nothing to do with me! This is just an accident, and I don't want to have sex with you, nor do I want your money!" - honey20001yrCommented
This was the story told in the Holy Quran as how the devil was jealous when Adam was first created by Allah.
Azazel was threatened and jealous. He became obsessed with the human, observing his soulless form made of clay. What could be so special about this creature? The human was made of dirt while he was made of smokeless fire. He was like energy. He could float in and out of the human's body. - honey20001yrCommented
Candace was supposed to have golden curly hair, not black.
"Hello, Candace! I met Jade at the hotel and she told me you are here," he said as his eyes travelled over her body, from her short crop of black hair to the sandals she was wearing. She looked sort of exhausted, but she looked good. - honey20001yrCommented
Hahaha..very funny
"I'm sure you know that's not true. It's not like Jade was going to eat you up, and you needed protection. It was a simple phone conversation, yet you looked like you were going to pass out. When you talk to me, you sound like a tiger, but when it's Jade, you sound like a sick cat," Tom said in amusement, and Harry glared at him. - honey20001yrCommented
Should be Run Mansion.
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Really? Haha
"You won't understand my feelings. Imagine growing a cabbage for more than two decades only for it to be stolen by a dog," His words were followed by another regretful sigh. - honey20001yrCommentedCh 136 It might take them a lifetime
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I thought it was Julian.
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We usually say thanks
"Thank…" - honey20001yrCommented
I don't understand why Dane is wasting his time at the office, the police station and the penthouse, and he did not go to the apartment over the bridge to check on Lila and for clues immediately. If he insists on NOT telling Chris and the team about Lila's location but he himself did not take immediate action to check on Lila's location, I think something is missing in the story line.
And so, with his head bowed, and a broken sob in his throat, Dane made himself look. Made himself remember. He pushed into the tub room and reminded himself about her wet skin, and warm mouth and the way she'd given herself over to him on their wedding night.