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omg I just complained about rapist Locke in the last chapter and now he apologizes and talks to her like a proper human being. Better late than never. Good job.
Mediocre story and characters. The ML was fine with the original owner of the FL body dying. He literally says let me know when she is dead. Cold as ice. Once the FL agrees to the divorce he wants, he no longer wants a divorce. He feels 'uncomfortable' that he got want he asked for. Once he is ignored he is like the 5 year old that wants his toy back. The he does every including stalking to get her back. Manipulates what he can to get her to live next door and accept things from him, and to hang out with him. The FL is smart in general but her IQ and strong personality dives into the negative with the ML. For some reason she wants alimony. Even after she realizes she can make money with her friend. I don't understand why she won't just get a loan from her flithy rich friend to live on. Her cooking makes money very easily so she can return the money soon enough. So it's like she letting herself stay attached to the husband for a superficial reason. She herself keeps saying she'll be killed by being around him BUT keeps their relationship going. I don't understand why she does whatever he says and never speaks up about anything she doesn't like. She's always like oh it's awkward, oh it's too late to say something. Insane. Next she'll be like oh I'm already lying down in his bed oh well it's too late to say anything. Either leave him properly or be lovers. So painful to keep reading and I read up to chp 337. I wasted my time.
Boring, repetitive. The voluptuous female character, who is very voluptuous by the way, is so voluptuous that her voluptuous body is constantly commented on. When people make girls with huge boobs that apparently have been training heavily their whole life have GG breasts. I'm always in disbelief, that would be so painful. Murong is pretty much just there for the MC to grope. 𤢠MC is so OP, there is actually no reason to have a number associated with his extraction ability. By chapter 105 it's at 190, one hundred and ninety! times an HOUR. Just put infinite and call it a day. Also there is absolutely no comment of anyones family. Is the MC an orphan? Did I miss something?
I didn't read the synopsis. Good to know that it's written in English but that doesn't change the fact that it is hard to read. A beta reader would help a lot or a better beta reader if the author already has one. With the amount of competition and options out there, why would someone pay for bad grammar and vocabulary?
Same old trope which is fine if it didn't have the typical stalking male lead. Creepy older man basically harassing an underage girl. No apparently means yes. Typical of Chinese novels so not surprised but super cringy and lame. And how the MC is surprised by her period so far when the male lead is around. I also don't understand how the strong female lead is forced to accept the ml thanks all the time. She always gives in or is tricked into giving in. So she's super smart and calculating in everything but the ml and her own body? And how can her period be so unreliable when she knows super Chinese medicine. Regular Chinese medicine can fix all those issues. Readable especially if you skip any scenes with the male lead.
You're kidding me right? Suddenly 4 million over budget is nothing? I'm so happy I've never met anyone this stupid in real life. The only thing worst than dumb people who do dumb things is a supposedly smart person who does ridiculously dumb things for no reason....(a girl isn't a reason, if she was his pre rebirth wife, sure but they are just strangers who are attracted to each other). At least in his old life he did things for people he thought he knew well.
What is wrong with a girl killing a deer? And why would you be shocked at that in this game where people kill rabbits (probably cute too) at the begining to level up and continue throughout with all kinds of animals and beasts. They've already been playing for several days. How did the boys even level up a all? Did they just go and look for ugly creatures?
I'm not sure why Ren didn't lose Lily waaay back when. You come from the PvP future, where people apparently would PvP sleeping players if they slept out in the open and people play and walk around with their guilds and friends because you could be jumped by anyone who was stronger than you. So your telling me that Ren (man with no friends) never built up any area awareness and would not try to run/teleport (no need to kill just lose that girl) away from a stranger who was following him as soon as he noticed her? How can you explore an unknown dungeon with a stranger. Even your friends/pig-like-teammates can step on a trap and mess things up not to mention a useless (as written previously) girl who everyone is busing through the game. Anyway just plot comments.
I guess beautiful people are only supposed to be nice? (In some mythical world). Plus just because she wants to kill the rabbits, which is what you do in games, she's suddenly horrid and savage. Please use the same descriptor on Ren when he massacres the poor LVL 1 goblins, lol.
Great that there is no harem. Harem is just pandering to male egos. Any woman with self respect won't settle for a man who doesn't think she is enough. Polygamy that both partners agree upon is also okay if not my cup of tea, because both the man and the woman are sleeping with whoever they want and everyone is aware. Its when you get that b's where women have to stay virgins, only sleep with one man, who on top if it pick up a bunch of other woman. Unless all the women are pure goldiggers and don't need to meet the man ever, it really doesn't make any sense.
Obviously the jumper is female and is jealous of the other girls being all over Hye that's why the jumper is acting that way. So lame. And why can the dragons fly them over? At least Hye with is teleportation staff and everyone else can just go through the portal.
How can a modern woman be so timid she can't even open the book? I feel like the female lead was only described as transmigrated to give her medical skills and to face slap the crown Prince. Other than that she is as timid around men as a real 15 year old girl from ancient times.
I suppose I'm too old and have too much self respect for myself as a woman to like forced marriage stories between children and adults twice their age. If you like stories where women have no say and the ml forces a relationship then this is for you. I usually read transmigration stories to see a woman use her modern intelligence and knowledge to run her own life. And at the very least marry who she wants. This female lead is oblivious to everything including basic personal safety when going out (giving the author many reasons to have her saved by the amazing and super strong but really he is dying emperor everytime. So lame. And of course the invincible emperor gets injured everytime he saves her from something. He fights a horde of wolves effortlessly but get mauled by one that jumped at the female lead. So lame and unrealistic. So. forced marriage. the female lead has no choice people still think its romantic? I like how people think just because the ml is the Emperor and is good looking, his overbearing attitude is just him cutely showing his love. To a 15 old girl on top of it. No means 'it's doesn't matter' in these novels. If he was an ugly obese emperor, people wouldn't be calling this story a romance. Its forcing a child to marry you for your selfish and perverse reasons.