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I have read ALOT... Now attempting a book, give it a read and tear me a new one with criticism
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I know we are far past 4 lol I was thinking more like 8 or 9
Anthony not causing trouble? Sure! Trouble will find Anthony then.
What book volume is this now anyways?
Weird metallic structure siphoning thunder qi… something odd is in the center of the danger zone… Question is what? Thoughts/Ideas: - Secret base of a long forgotten or dead sun - Part of an Energy grid the blue sun uses - Whatever is at the core of the world uses the ambient lightning qi to power itself using the rods.. (maybe a portal to the higher plane) - corpse of some lightning type beast or person at a realm higher than the suns - Secret Realm opening at its core
So an additional 4 months passed on Baoway before the call with Khans dad? 8months in total?
Now… how will the lightning assist the ship?… - Super charge the engine turbines? - Magnetize the ship to increase speed over the conductive ground? (Ship turns into a railgun bullet) - Funnel lightning qi into his puppets and discharge the rest out the back for more thrust? So many fun options! Muwahaha
Always fun to be able to call out a future senario 😆 (I called this last chap)
Agreed… but spiders are worse. I’d rather be hunted down by 15 wasps than 15 spiders of the same size any day
Mantis gods and centipede devils… are wasps angels and spiders demons? 🤣
Ok this one was a good stab at buggy boys
First, I read it all. —— I’d say some of that could work. But the main think I don’t think will would be the differing base laws. The vast expanse has ‘incomplete’ laws supposed to the beyond. I believe this will be another similar case to this. Maybe laws are not the end, maybe the laws are complete but the higher tier just does not exist. Something like Concepts, laws for emotions/souls/ego… Heaven appear to be the umbrella everything is under so I have to assume that if we hold the vast expanse as a universe and that universe is within the beyond’s universe then whatever heaven is would be all encompassing for the higher and lower worlds. The amount of power a lower or higher world can handle dictates the complexity of avalibe laws. —— Going your route though. Maybe the heaven realms as they called it are meant to dictate your own custom law and transform yourself into a being of laws. If they are a law then other laws cannot effect them when they ascend later. Also most likely a heaven realm means they have a universe within themselves but without soul laws it’s likely dead. Unless Heavens soul aspect also effects internal universes, which would then generate life. The reason suns have a domain might be because of this, so when any cultivator in their inner universe hits the max threshold of power they can release them into their domain to continue cultivating. Though they will likely be somehow intrinsically linked to the host universe I’d assume
S: “Sit down and buckle up” L: “This ship is amazing!” *looking around ignoring instruction* S: “Law, hit that big red button” L: “The button that specifically says, ‘Do Not Press’?” S: “Yup!” *mad grin* L: *Shrug* “Alright then” Ship proceeds to accelerate so fast Law is catapulted into a rear seat due to not having sat down and buckling up
O god…. Time to drop off a couple 10,000 puppets to go “collect” resources. If anyone has seen stargate atlantis tv show… Shen Boa is about to build a race of replicators I swear. —— Baiko, look up what the replicators are, could be a good feature to add somewhere
I figured there was another plane above this one. Things often happen in sets of 3 The heavens servant that intruded upon Shen Boa in the Spacial fold that he killed the soul monstrosity that was attacking master rain and the heavenly academy… that thing was beyond huge from what I gathered and it was capable of tearing into the vast expanse without affecting it unlike the Suns. Makes me believe there has to be more stages above the level of the Suns. Most likely there is a portal or ruin in the center of the beyond, possibly a world taken over by demons or something that is causing that corrupted Qi to fill up that under ground world. All in all, I cannot wait to read more!
Maybe not anymore, he did evolve