I'm a big fan of fiction and fantasy, usually spending hours and hours reading books.
I really liked this story despite it's small flaws (Grammar mistakes, the MC getting awesome bonuses from the start - nothing too bad though). Sadly it appears to have been dropped by the author.
This story has shown great potential, and it might become more popular if the author continues writing with the same quality they have so far. There are very few grammatical mistakes that I've noticed but they do not get in the way of a enjoyable experience, and the plot moves at a nice enjoyable pace. Overall I'd say that the characters have yet to show more of themselves and their personalities, but I believe the author will adress that in future chapters. This story is pretty enjoyable to read and I recommend it to anyone looking for the reborn/system troupe (BL included).
So far this story has shown to be quite promising despite a few grammatical errors here and there, and if the author continues with their overall performance, it will definitely become a story that's worth reading for it's plot and characters. I'm looking foward to how the author will shape it in the coming chapters and hope that they will not drop it. Stay safe everyone!