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They're called suppressors.
You're. You should at-least try with these things.
You have some serious problems with were's, we'res, and wheres.
Wow. An error on the literal first sentence. That's impressive.
Honestly. I really like this. It's written really well, all things considered. It's got many issues in it's writing, but it feels good, and in all ways that matter, that's the most important thing. However. The story. Honestly, it feels like random things just... Happen. There's absolutely no sense of causation. Things just... Happen as the Author wills it. The further into this you get, the worse it gets. Honestly, it's unbearable. Don't read this. The characters are great. The writing quality is a diamond in the rough. But the story is awful.
cheese. I like cheese pizza. And I don't hate pineapple on pizza, but it's not really pizza at that point.
He absorbed Surya, remember?
ngl I'm sick of these "zones" that nullify the her power. it's the same thing over and over and over.
i would have chosen giant caterpillar. seeing as how it's an upgrade in the same stage, he'd have much more potential.
Garbage. These characters aren't a single bit human. the author doesn't even try. Like, protagonist tries to save a girl, gets punted and nearly murdered by the girl he tried to save, and then again! he tries to save her, and she tries to kill him. this is a failure in writing on one of the basest levels imaginable.
What's with isekai/vrmmo protagonists and having "basic" characters? it's so boring.
I eat tomatoes worst work. And he agreed. He dropped this novel. He never finished it. Protagonist becomes a side character in one of his other novels, though. Anyway, don't read this if you want something that actually gets an ending. Anyway, it's his most boring work. Go read one of his other ones.
Luck is basically always the most valuable stat in web novels like this, but most authors have their protagonists completely ignore that. I hope that's not the case here.
this... Isn't a good sign. between the oddly innacurate synopsis, and now typing "lol" in... Huh.