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Niche267

Niche267

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2019-02-06 JoinedUnited States
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  • Niche267
    Niche2672yr
    Commented

    They're called suppressors.

    This was a trick he learned in the army. If your gun wasn't equipped with a silencer, you can use the Silent Feet potion to temporarily muffle the sound. He headed directly toward the Goblin's Village.
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    My Faᵵe System
    Fantasy · MellowGuy
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  • Niche267
    Niche2672yr
    Replied to Krisnan

    Yeahhhh.

    Ch 118 Creature (Part 2)
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    A Bored Lich
    Fantasy · Random_writer
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  • Niche267
    Niche2672yr
    Posted

    This is... Good? Like, actually? It's a supremely strange concept, but I've really enjoyed reading it. I honestly can't think of any flaws this has in particular. I hope for more.

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    A Tale of the Eternal Hunters
    Anime & Comics · DaoistofBoredom
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  • Niche267
    Niche2672yr
    Posted

    The first sentence has a blatant error. Of the sort that's constantly repeated. The author doesn't bother to check what they wrote. If you're okay with that, then you can try it. Personally, I can't stand such a low standard of effort.

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    Tera Online [Deleted]
    Fantasy · Masquerade1010
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  • Niche267
    Niche2672yr
    Commented

    You're. You should at-least try with these things.

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    Tera Online [Deleted]
    Fantasy · Masquerade1010
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  • Niche267
    Niche2672yr
    Commented

    You have some serious problems with were's, we'res, and wheres.

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    Tera Online [Deleted]
    Fantasy · Masquerade1010
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  • Niche267
    Niche2672yr
    Commented

    Wow. An error on the literal first sentence. That's impressive.

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    Tera Online [Deleted]
    Fantasy · Masquerade1010
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  • Niche267
    Niche2672yr
    Posted

    Honestly. I really like this. It's written really well, all things considered. It's got many issues in it's writing, but it feels good, and in all ways that matter, that's the most important thing. However. The story. Honestly, it feels like random things just... Happen. There's absolutely no sense of causation. Things just... Happen as the Author wills it. The further into this you get, the worse it gets. Honestly, it's unbearable. Don't read this. The characters are great. The writing quality is a diamond in the rough. But the story is awful.

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    Godhome
    Fantasy · GoneSoSoon
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  • Niche267
    Niche2672yr
    Commented

    cheese. I like cheese pizza. And I don't hate pineapple on pizza, but it's not really pizza at that point.

    (A/N: What's your favorite pizza toppings? Also, what's your view on pineapple on Pizza? I need to know.)
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    Time Stops When I'm with Her. (MHA)
    Anime & Comics · Hyberions
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  • Niche267
    Niche2672yr
    Replied to Ragnova

    He absorbed Surya, remember?

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    Karna: The Hero of Charity
    Anime & Comics · OmniverseDivine
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  • Niche267
    Niche2672yr
    Posted

    I have enjoyed this massively, and I hope it continues. Honestly, it's just a lot of fun. The author has a lot of talent, and I really enjoy how the characters are written. Of course, this is a power fantasy to end all power fantasies, but that notwithstanding, it's really good.

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    Time Stops When I'm with Her. (MHA)
    Anime & Comics · Hyberions
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  • Niche267
    Niche2672yr
    Replied to Stire

    My interpretation is this. If they won't spend the time to tell me what they're selling, why would I spend the time to look myself? It's lazy and disgustingly arrogant. If something evokes literal anger in such a manner that isn't a literary tool, then that's deserving of a negative review.

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    Death... and me
    Fantasy · Suiyan
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  • Niche267
    Niche2672yr
    Commented

    ngl I'm sick of these "zones" that nullify the her power. it's the same thing over and over and over.

    "Main Mind, this Zone is no simple thing! It completely negates your magic! It's incredibly hard to crack! I can't even understand these spells used to make it, such ancient magic!"
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    Epic of Caterpillar
    Fantasy · PancakesWitch
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  • Niche267
    Niche2672yr
    Commented

    i would have chosen giant caterpillar. seeing as how it's an upgrade in the same stage, he'd have much more potential.

    [Undine Butterfly has been selected]
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    Epic of Caterpillar
    Fantasy · PancakesWitch
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  • Niche267
    Niche2672yr
    Posted

    Garbage. These characters aren't a single bit human. the author doesn't even try. Like, protagonist tries to save a girl, gets punted and nearly murdered by the girl he tried to save, and then again! he tries to save her, and she tries to kill him. this is a failure in writing on one of the basest levels imaginable.

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    Blood Type: Dragon
    Fantasy · iamnaz7
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  • Niche267
    Niche2672yr
    Commented

    What's with isekai/vrmmo protagonists and having "basic" characters? it's so boring.

    "Basic."
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    Closed Beta That Only I Played
    Fantasy · basso77
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  • Niche267
    Niche2672yr
    Posted

    I eat tomatoes worst work. And he agreed. He dropped this novel. He never finished it. Protagonist becomes a side character in one of his other novels, though. Anyway, don't read this if you want something that actually gets an ending. Anyway, it's his most boring work. Go read one of his other ones.

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    Swallowed Star
    Eastern · I Eat Tomatoes
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  • Niche267
    Niche2672yr
    Replied to Krizantem

    Maybe not, but atleast proofread. So many authors on here don't even bother. Even on this response, you didn't put a space after write.

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    Supreme Lord Shapeshifter
    Fantasy · Krizantem
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  • Niche267
    Niche2672yr
    Commented

    Luck is basically always the most valuable stat in web novels like this, but most authors have their protagonists completely ignore that. I hope that's not the case here.

    Luck: 5
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    Dominatrix System
    Fantasy · Madjic
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  • Niche267
    Niche2672yr
    Commented

    this... Isn't a good sign. between the oddly innacurate synopsis, and now typing "lol" in... Huh.

    It's really convenient when your dad owns the biggest motorcycle company in the country lol. I put my matching helmet on, special boots, knee pads, and head off.
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    Infinity: Rising of the Soul Weavers
    Fantasy · DioisBAd4dM
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