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It was great the start, but now it seems to be lacking much...excitement? Atm everything just seems trivial. Less about the concept of summoning in itself, and more about having allies in general. Main character is also strong enough on his own that troubles are easily solved. I have hope that changes in the future, but I'll stop here for now. Thanks for the story!
The action is good, but it starting to feel like the concept of mana and mana-regeneration was thrown out the door. You stated that each summon siphons mana from the summoner in order to both persist and use their own mana-required abilities. In this long fight scene, you displayed each summon using said abilities while also having the MC machine-gun out spells and mana-enhancements. Not once has the MC stated about mana running low, or that his mana-regen was going into any type of deficit. Hopefully this is explained in the later chapters, but atm it's detracting from some pre-established limits of power.