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Joeboon

Joeboon

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2019-01-29 JoinedUnited States
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  • Joeboon
    Joeboon2yr
    Commented

    "Raging face" ????

    Harry tore his gaze from the factories to stare at Raymond's raging face, "Thanks."
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    The Legendary Junkmaster
    Fantasy · Antihero
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  • Joeboon
    Joeboon2yr
    Posted

    Extremely mediocre book. It's legible so it's better than a lot of stories on here, but everything else is kind of a mess. Every other sentence ends in an exclamation point to try and create fake excitement. Please stop saying "RUMBLE!" in completely random spots that make zero sense.

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    My Idle Gaming System
    Games · Adui
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  • Joeboon
    Joeboon2yr
    Commented

    Stop

    RUMBLE!
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    My Idle Gaming System
    Games · Adui
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  • Joeboon
    Joeboon3yr
    Commented

    Hey Mr. Author. One small tip. Just in this first chapter there's a big glaring error: You lack word diversity. In about the first 20 paragraphs you say 'Qin Yi' in like 18 of them. It also happens later in the chapter with a dozen or so paragraphs starting with or containing 'Qin Yi'. Also looking at the start of chapter 2 you do it more. You need to diversify a little bit or it gets tiring to read very quickly.

    Ch 1 The Extraction System Activated
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    I Can Extract Everything
    Eastern · Mysterious_Pen
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  • Joeboon
    Joeboon3yr
    Commented

    What happened to "I would be taking advantage of his niceness tomorrow"

    I could tell dawn was about to arise upon the horizon, so I decided to get up and head towards the capital alone. Even if Alan's character and position intrigued me, I preferred to explore the capital on my own, not holding conversations.
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    New World - A New Beginning
    Fantasy · kenkan
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  • Joeboon
    Joeboon3yr
    Commented

    It's a little strange that three years have gone by and scavengers haven't looted an abandoned blacksmith....

    Ch 13 Wanderer
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    New World - A New Beginning
    Fantasy · kenkan
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  • Joeboon
    Joeboon3yr
    Commented

    Spears aren't really one handed weapons while Swords are....

    In fact, now that he considered the topic, Darius was quite surprised as to why spear magicians had not really been featured in media, yet sword-wielding magicians named Spellblades existed. The best explanation he could come up with was that it was most likely an aesthetic thing.
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    Darius Supreme
    Fantasy · Kotario
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  • Joeboon
    Joeboon3yr
    Commented

    That's not how physics work lol....

    From Xie Feng's point of view, those people are simply brainless people. When a hand-to-hand fighter enters a ten-foot range, the Archers' arrows stop causing so much damage because they don't have the time to get enough boost. Still, these brainless people only thought of quick wins instead of waiting patiently.
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    Samsara Online
    Games · XIETIAN
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  • Joeboon
    Joeboon3yr
    Posted

    Gave it a dozen or so chapters -- the translation is pretty awful with large parts sounding like its straight up mtl. Based on what I read the original work seems pretty awful too. in a dozen chapters there was no character or story development. Not even any fighting. Just whoa I got VR and joined a game two weeks passed and I hit max level repeat 3x. Even though things started to pick up I couldn't continue with how bad the translation is

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    Closed Beta That Only I Played
    Fantasy · basso77
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  • Joeboon
    Joeboon3yr
    Replied to MILARCH

    He basically said "technically its the norm in most novels that when you have a super op ability the CD is long"

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    Doomsday Online: Supreme Blessing
    Urban · Jixia Academy's Half-Step Gentleman
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  • Joeboon
    Joeboon3yr
    Posted

    The numbers make no sense and the timeline makes no sense. Going into a novel like this you need a certain level of suspension of disbelief but after a while it just became too much. Oh its like 4 days after the apocalypse? Here's three well established gangs with hundreds of members who are all somehow the same level as OP mc and all have what was supposed to be extremely rare equipment. Also MC keeps throwing out terms and ideas that he knows about as a reincarnator and his group somehow automatically understands what they mean.

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    Doomsday Online: Supreme Blessing
    Urban · Jixia Academy's Half-Step Gentleman
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  • Joeboon
    Joeboon3yr
    Posted

    Its so refreshing reading a story on here with an MC who isn't a bloodthirsty psychopath. OP MC, but there's enough actual character rather than cardboard that the story is still more enjoyable than 99% of the repetitive stories on here. Recommend giving it a try.

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    Cultivation Online
    Games · MyLittleBrother
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  • Joeboon
    Joeboon3yr
    Posted

    This novel really hooked me at the start. The novel jumps right in with supernatural themes and mystery. There's a slow and steady build of tension and horror as things start pointing towards a darker and darker path and just as you think things are going to start happening...... He starts going to classes at uni and there are multiple chapter long bits of him learning how to suture or perform surgery or tie knots. I knew going in this was going to be a doctor novel but I was hopeful that it would focus more on the eldritch supernatural based on the start. I eventually stopped reading as the amount of interesting stuff was far outweighed by boring repetitive doctor things with extremely small bits of what made the novel great at the start. It may get better in the future but I lost interest and couldn't force myself to read more after pushing for 20+ chapters waiting for something to happen.

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    Plague Doctor
    Horror · Wallee The Robot
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