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"Raging face" ????
Hey Mr. Author. One small tip. Just in this first chapter there's a big glaring error: You lack word diversity. In about the first 20 paragraphs you say 'Qin Yi' in like 18 of them. It also happens later in the chapter with a dozen or so paragraphs starting with or containing 'Qin Yi'. Also looking at the start of chapter 2 you do it more. You need to diversify a little bit or it gets tiring to read very quickly.
What happened to "I would be taking advantage of his niceness tomorrow"
Spears aren't really one handed weapons while Swords are....
That's not how physics work lol....
Gave it a dozen or so chapters -- the translation is pretty awful with large parts sounding like its straight up mtl. Based on what I read the original work seems pretty awful too. in a dozen chapters there was no character or story development. Not even any fighting. Just whoa I got VR and joined a game two weeks passed and I hit max level repeat 3x. Even though things started to pick up I couldn't continue with how bad the translation is
The numbers make no sense and the timeline makes no sense. Going into a novel like this you need a certain level of suspension of disbelief but after a while it just became too much. Oh its like 4 days after the apocalypse? Here's three well established gangs with hundreds of members who are all somehow the same level as OP mc and all have what was supposed to be extremely rare equipment. Also MC keeps throwing out terms and ideas that he knows about as a reincarnator and his group somehow automatically understands what they mean.
This novel really hooked me at the start. The novel jumps right in with supernatural themes and mystery. There's a slow and steady build of tension and horror as things start pointing towards a darker and darker path and just as you think things are going to start happening...... He starts going to classes at uni and there are multiple chapter long bits of him learning how to suture or perform surgery or tie knots. I knew going in this was going to be a doctor novel but I was hopeful that it would focus more on the eldritch supernatural based on the start. I eventually stopped reading as the amount of interesting stuff was far outweighed by boring repetitive doctor things with extremely small bits of what made the novel great at the start. It may get better in the future but I lost interest and couldn't force myself to read more after pushing for 20+ chapters waiting for something to happen.