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I'm very creative when it comes to making up stories and stuff.Im not as talkative as most people.I love fictional books and romance too action is nice too.I love horror movies for some reason.
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snowstorm1611mthCommented"In this battle, I have only one true competitor and one wild variable, but you're neither," replied Mo Xingyun. "At best, you are a mild convenience."- snowstorm161yrCommented"So what if he hit me? he's my boyfriend. I love it when he hits me. What does it have to do with you?"detailI Transmigrated into a Book and Became the Real Rich Daughter's Pampered CousinGeneral · Please Give Buff
- snowstorm161yrCommentedIt was as if they were using a nuclear bomb to fight refugees!
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Am i the only one who thinks that if not for Wang Wei being the mc of this story almost no one is worth being a greater mc in this story than Di Tian. I'm just hoping that with how powerful Di Tian is, the final battle between him and Wang Wei will not be greatly reduced or summarised , totally undermining his brilliance as a "villain" in this case. A mastermind and talent like Di Tian should be given the right amount of appreciation.
Ch 443 Outlaw (II) - snowstorm161yrCommentedHis real purpose was to secretly place Invisible Karma Threads on his peers to be used later in the Heaven Will Battle. Normal Karma Threads are easy to set but also easy to be detected.
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wait isn't nascent soul realm above dao seed realm?
Jiang Ming said gruffly, "There they are…" Then, he laughed maniacally for a moment before he said, "I'll kill all of you today, Ge Changqing, for destroying my sect in the past."detail10,000 Years In A Cultivation Sect: I Obtained A Powerful Technique From The StartEastern · Li Baijin - snowstorm161yrCommented
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She activated it inside the tower, but it's manifesting outside!" Zhiyang Peak's First Seat, Yue Cheng, was initially shocked, then a fervent desire filled his eyes. He was even clenching his fists without meaning to. "This can't be achieved if all she had was a sliver of the phoenix bloodline in her body. This means that the phoenix power within her… Even if she's not the phoenix's daughter, she has to be a descendant of the phoenix. The offspring of a human and a phoenix which fell into the realms of men. If this is true…"detail10,000 Years In A Cultivation Sect: I Obtained A Powerful Technique From The StartEastern · Li Baijin - snowstorm161yrReplied to jay9626
That is true but don't forget that there are some heaven chosen who can fight above their realm, and most time their fighting experience is how their win. With them, realm suppression will only count if the Mc is at least two realms above them.
Jiang Ming knew if his junior sister was truly the child of destiny, she would definitely be a prominent figure in the future. However, this also meant that she would attract trouble to herself. He sighed. 'In any case, she's my beloved junior sister, and I've watched her grow up. I'll kill anyone who dares to bully her.'detail10,000 Years In A Cultivation Sect: I Obtained A Powerful Technique From The StartEastern · Li Baijin - snowstorm163yrReplied to Phoeneix
Right I think there is some confusion here, though she hadn't seen her family in the years she had left home I mentioned earlier in this chapter that she did regularly call back home and send gifts. So though she hadn't seen them in six/ seven years she did talk to them. The six years mentioned here is of the time she spent in the apocalypse
"Lia dear.?" Listening to her mom's voice she hadn't heard in 6 years Emilia's eyes teared up and she called out with a shaking voice - snowstorm163yrCommented
Thanks I noticed now and I'll fix this
"Lia dear.?" Listening to her mom's voice she hadn't heard in 6 years Emilia's eyes teared up and she called out with a shaking voice - snowstorm163yrCommented
She did not use her own money to pay off the two houses but the one from her allowance, I mentioned this in chapter 10 ''Be there soon" . And as for how the family has that much money was mentioned in chapter 18 when Qin Lu describes his mother's family. It is mentioned there that her brother, his uncle is a CEO of a company he inherited from their father( Qin Lu's grandpa). And her salary was based off my research about how much food scientist make in South Africa with a five year experience. But thank you for your comment I realised that there were somethings that I need to make clear so that readers are not confused moving forward and it seems I need to fix the issues with my timeline.
"Hi is this Mr Song. Ya this is Miss Lu , right the one who bought house no 5 in Jinya gardens. I would like to buy house no 4 and 7 . Yes I'm serious." Looking at the time and seeing that it was still 5 Emilia decided to get it all done now. " Mr Song is it possible to go through the procedures now, we can meet at 6:30 if your ok with that? Ok Mr Song I'll see you later today. Bye then." - snowstorm163yrReplied to Phoeneix
oh I hadn't noticed that but thank you for your comments it is very helpful in identifiying loop holes or other errors I made
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