Delvogen
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This fan fiction is impressive, offering a bit of everything for readers. I've read up to chapter 97, and the story continues to captivate as we approach the second year. Most characters remain true to the original canon while still showcasing unique and original elements. That being said, there are quite a few problems with the wording used, mostly in the later chapters that I have read. An example would be: uses her instead of him. Still giving it 5 stars because I enjoyed a new Harry Potter fan fic coming out.
Thanks. It has been corrected.
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It's crazy, but I've been remembering it incorrectly for years.
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I agree, Lector. In addition to that, there are numerous errors with pronouns, names, and several off-putting remarks. Furthermore, the author seems to struggle with maintaining consistency with what was written in the earlier chapters. I try to keep things running smoothly, but I'm aware that sometimes things sound off. Anyway, hope you all like it.
They have Snape.......
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Done, thanks.
Thank you Sami_Alfoheday. Fixed. Also, I changed the wording so it is not used multiple times in a short time, and corrected his name.
Fixed. Also, I changed the wording around so it is not used multiple times in a short amount of time.
ya, I wanted to change it. When I first started reading this I thought he ate Sirus!
Guess I will give it to him. He was empowering himself to fight the dog, right?