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All_Seeing_King1yrCommentedwhere are the images from?!?!?
( i m a g e )- All_Seeing_King1yrCommented
+1 quality is good for the amount of chapters that you put out
Keep it the same - All_Seeing_King1yrCommented
Is baskerville a good sugestion?
10.) Any other suggestions? - All_Seeing_King1yrCommented
i can read this parragraph. it is mostly jumbled up to the point that most of it is giberish. there are paragraphs like this in most of the chapters, why
"Let's get this over with, and then we can make preparations to get this circus on the move. I swear the Alliance goes as overboard with political observers as the Humans do with military force." The Dryad added. - All_Seeing_King1yrCommented
a way to make it so that it doesn't affect the story much is that he can only increase the stats artifically by decimal points like by 0.1 per point and that he can't put say put 10 points in a stat at once. you can also make it so that the larger the stat the more points needed to make that stat higher. one thing that you can do that would probaly help is to make skills that he can learn, such as shooting(Rifles) or CQC(UNSC). the words in the parentheses being the specifics that the skill would work on and that he has to continually use and practice to raise the skill level. this should help you
Ch -3 Information about the System - All_Seeing_King1yrCommented
option 1 or 3.
(A/N: You'll be voting for this since I'm going to take a break in writing for a week or more - can't believe I've been writing this for almost 3 months. The 3 options are summarised like this, the faster the progression of Hanns, the harsher the challenges.) - All_Seeing_King1yrReplied to Jake_Hansel
with how you write. I doubt that you are a beginner at writing. it is something you would expect of someone who had written multiple works before
|Important Note| - All_Seeing_King1yrCommentedCh 24 [Bastard]
- All_Seeing_King2yrCommented
CLARKSON!!!!
Great, I do not know Italian so I don't understand anything. Ugh at least I know it's Italian so the likeliness of being in Italy is very high... I know, sometimes my genius is almost frightening. - All_Seeing_King2yrCommented
keep going as is
3. Keep going as I am. - All_Seeing_King2yrReplied to NotSoBigShlong
lord have mercy
(AN: You can comment here Yua's child and teenager appearance) - All_Seeing_King2yrCommented
the answer to that question is........RUN AWAY!!!!
(AN: In Bleach, Rukia learn Shikai from Kaien about 3 or 5 years after she graduated. Since that happened Fifty years before she met Ichigo, it means she had Shikai for 50 years. What's more, she is an expert in Kido. Despite this, she nearly died because of some weak ass hollow in Ep/Ch 1. There are many possible reasons. One, she jumped in to save Ichigo who was stupid and rushed toward an enemy he can't beat. Two. She was traumatized because of the event that would happen soon in Canon and didn't train for 5O years. Three and honestly the most likely. Kubo didn't really create the concept of Shikai in CH 1. The first Shikai was introduced in CH 54 with Renji. That basically one year and two weeks since the first CH of Bleach. Also did you know that initially Rukia was supposed to be the main character of Bleach?) - All_Seeing_King3yrCommented
WHY!?!?!?!? JUST WHY!?!?!?!?!?
After shaking the blood of his gloved hand with a look of disgust on his face under his mask, Wraith stood there for a while, chuckling darkly to himself. Admiring his work till deciding he had had enough fun, and he left. Still chuckling to himself like he had just told the funniest joke ever. - All_Seeing_King3yrCommented
oh no
"Now... how to punish the man in the most humiliating way that would make Rei praise me." Pakura's eyes darkened and glinted in a peculiar way that made Kaya take a step back when Pakura turned towards her with a mischievous smile, "Hey Kaya... You said the brother of the Earth Daimyo, one of the five grand nobles of the Land of Earth is currently visiting the village, right?" Pakura's eyes started to hover over Jiraiya's unconscious form, narrowed in a catlike way with a bit of glee in them. "I wonder..." - All_Seeing_King3yrCommented
i picture a chibi logan siting on top of a large grimm corpse with the sidewinder next to him
Ozpin: "Logan?" Ozpin said in a very quiet voice. "I doubt anything could survive that." - All_Seeing_King3yrCommented
lord have mercy on their souls.
Gods were among them. - All_Seeing_King3yrCommentedCh 51 Ch 50: Memories: Wraith Raising