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kritikajkapoor6mthPostedafter reading more than hundreds of novels on same storyline I would way say this story is little different and development so far is also different from other common topic carrying novels ...it's quite nice to read and I wish writer to update it asap and hope it will remain interesting throughout
detailAfter the Fake Young Lady Stole Everything from Me, I Became the World's SweetheartUrban · ACEE- kritikajkapoor1yrPosted
i must say it is one of the best story lines i came across I successfully finished this one i must say everything about this story is super exciting..friendship, families, love, and relationships are all amazingly justified ...the bond it shows will make you feel happy and safe at the same time...no overly dramatic love story ..a simple not over the top unrealistic one. best part is the friendship it shows ... well done writer
- kritikajkapoor1yrPosted
first of all I would say well done writer you have nailed it in all possible way,emotions , confusions, tragedy, undying love, everything is perfectly set and the most important of all its not that same repeated sub of male dominating ceo so call miss so sad as an fl all together it is a novel which is totally totally fresh and hooks you up throughout .yes you want to ignore few pages of feeling development and charater imagining xyz but you still won't stop ....i hope to complete it soon.
- kritikajkapoor2yrCommented
spelling to be edit 'death' , 'they' .
Now she realized that she is always an eye sore to them. They have always shown their reluctance clearly on their devilish yet pretentious faces ever since her parents deatg. But she was in deep love with her cunning family to notice it. Taking it as granted tgey used her in all the ways they can and dumped her now. - kritikajkapoor2yrCommented
make it affection not affecting
While his voice sounded touching, there was no affecting in his eyes as he glanced at the wooden table beside him. Ah, if anything, she should be the one thanking him, right? Who wouldn't want to get out of this hellhole? - kritikajkapoor2yrCommented
wrong again
The little follower continued, "I, I don't care about you. Just opened the shop. Brother Bao, brother Bao, I want you to pay. Just, that's right. ". - kritikajkapoor2yrCommented
I think house should be shop here...just helping you...sorry to bother writer
Lao Min looked at the house carefully. It seemed to be newly renovated. The design and structure of the house was something she hadn't seen in a long time. It was very new and beautiful. - kritikajkapoor2yrCommented
first sentence is again with errors
Two hours of practice was neither fast nor fast, but neither slow nor slow. It was enough to torture her. She casually learned etiquette because, as the daughter of the Lu Corporation, a party or something like that was indispensable Moreover, the Wang Mother and daughter would definitely find a way to mess with her, so she had to learn etiquette so that she would not lose face. - kritikajkapoor2yrCommented
sentence has error...
Taking out her cell phone, Lu Yuxi made a call. "Hello, this is Lu Yuxi. May I ask if the Model I customized with you last time still has a special coat hanger completed? " - kritikajkapoor2yrCommented
beautiful lines..and damm it's true
It's always the people in our life that defines our life. We don't get tired of life, we get tired of the people in it. Life doesn't become hard all of a sudden, it's always the people who make everything seem hard for us. Most of all, life in itself isn't that precious. The people we love makes it precious for us.