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scrunchypants

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Bed goblin who enjoys reading. Yaaaaasss

2019-01-23 JoinedUnited States
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  • scrunchypants
    scrunchypants3yr
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    Disclaimer: I’ve only read the first chapter so I gave 3 stars to everything besides writing quality. Regardless of the grammatical errors, the pacing is very odd. There’s a superfluous use of adjectives and many of the sentences are, in a sense, robotic. A lot of points are unnecessarily repeated. I read through it 3x because I would never want to leave a rash review and I did notice many people lauding the unIqueness of the plot. so maybe there’s that? All in all, I found it difficult to read. P.S. If the person who did the coding for this text space ever reads this, please fix the auto-capitalizing upon backspace while within a word.

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    The Princess and The Lord
    Fantasy · blowfish1407
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  • scrunchypants
    scrunchypants3yr
    Commented

    Why are the free stories, after being taken away and then cut down from 3 choices to 1, all lacking in grammar?

    Ch 1 Prophecy (Prologue)
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    The Princess and The Lord
    Fantasy · blowfish1407
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