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I am a sucker for isekai, fantasy, and magic!

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  • Alfir
    Alfir26d
    Replied to Aadharshmax_Oop

    Already am aware, I gave my author notes already about that.

    [spoiler]Fun tidbit: I have always found Obito's lack of EMS annoying in the series. Besides the badass eye patterns, Obito would be a lot steadier in technique and practice if he had a stable 'second' Mangekyou ability, because that way, he could develop and refine his techniques much faster, and deadlier. I don't really get why Sasuke in the series even after receiving Itachi's MS, Sasuke cannot use Tsukuyomi (or maybe he doesn't like to use it). But Obito in the series just keeps on resorting to eye replacement like the Sharingan is some ninja tool, allowing him more abilities. For example, Obito casting Limited Tsukuyomi.
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    Don't Let Tobi Out!
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  • Alfir
    Alfir29d
    Replied to Romance_guy

    No romance.

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    The Undoer
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  • Alfir
    Alfir29d
    Replied to Xcolibur

    No Hyon yet, I just arrived back in the province, and I say I should restart writing on Wednesday. There won't be a Hyon chapter for some time, still deliberating on how to resurrect him. His bones were left on New Earth, so they could be used to resurrect him. He could also be resurrected in the Transcendent Plane. I am thinking about how to do the big reveal like Co-Author showing himself as Hyon.

    Ch 235 HEADS UP!
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    The Novel's Extra Nobody
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  • Alfir
    Alfir1mth
    Replied to Caedus_Aldric

    It would leave Obito's hands by the end of Kannabi Bridge, I think 2nd Volume, that's my plan at least.

    Ch 22 The Wand
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  • Alfir
    Alfir1mth
    Replied to Tigre_Negro008

    Low, Intermediate, High, Master, and last rank had no official title but mostly equated with the levels of the Nine Stars. Take note, the power levels in TNE are not absolute where a Low Rank would have zero chances of killing a Master Rank. A Low Rank would be able to kill people stronger than him through poison, or the use of 'Authority'. Power levels would become more and more irrelevant as the story moved on.

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    The Novel's Extra Nobody
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  • Alfir
    Alfir1mth
    Replied to Redrive

    This is a spoiler, be forewarned. Everyone gets a single hubby in the end. (That was according to how much I wrote for the yet-to-be-released Volume 4.) Rachel X Hyon pairing is final. The romance had been slow, but the two had it. Yeonha and Hyon were platonic with each other (had chemistry, but wouldn't work). Yeonha and Jonghak pairing might cause distaste, but I was getting there- rather than romantic, they might become best friends. Had potential in my opinion. For Suho and Hajin, are still unsure, but Hajin ends up shacking Byul in the end. Hajin might end up with two wives cuz I want to fuck over with him.

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    The Novel's Extra Nobody
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  • Alfir
    Alfir1mth
    Replied to Abdirahman_Isse

    Fair, extras are dropping like flies. But we do have to remember rank and numbers are not everything, and Minato is skilled... Heck, lots of characters in fiction have a protagonist aura that can do lots of stuff, so it shouldn't be a problem. Admittedly, I should have written it more eloquently, say: The Fuinjutsu Specialists under Danzo are effective practitioners of the art, unfortunately, they are just that--- years of training in the Sealing Arts has degraded their skill in combat to the point even a skilled Genin can easily make a jump on them Danzo is an excellent opportunist with good luck and useless arrogance, but not today for someone has tipped Minato and the Third Hokage of what a secret dealing might have occurred here.

    And then, Minato looks at Danzo dead in the eye, "Decline my proposition and see what will happen."
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    Don't Let Tobi Out!
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  • Alfir
    Alfir1mth
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    Fair, extras are dropping like flies. But we do have to remember rank is not everything, and Minato is skilled... I should have written it more eloquently, say: The Fuinjutsu Specialists under Danzo are effective practitioners of the art, unfortunately, they are just that--- years of training in the Sealing Arts has degraded their skill in combat to the point even a skilled Genin can easily make a jump on them Danzo is an excellent opportunist with good luck and useless arrogance, but not today for someone has tipped Minato and the Third Hokage of what a secret dealing might have occurred here.

    And then, Minato looks at Danzo dead in the eye, "Decline my proposition and see what will happen."
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    Don't Let Tobi Out!
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  • Alfir
    Alfir1mth
    Replied to Swalih_Vm_3780

    a lot

    Rachel nods, the weight of the situation settling heavily on her shoulders. She grips the edge of the seat, trying to find strength in Yun Seung-Ah's words, all the while yearning to be by Hyon's side.
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    The Novel's Extra Nobody
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  • Alfir
    Alfir1mth
    Replied to Swalih_Vm_3780

    Forgive me, I must be high from self deprivation.

    The frames rest snugly on his nose, an ever-present reminder of the world he came from. In the midst of the uncertainty that surrounds him, Suho maintains a cautious optimism. His high-tech glasses, despite their current state of disrepair, hold the potential for future usefulness – a glimmer of hope in a world filled with the unknown.
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    The Novel's Extra Nobody
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  • Alfir
    Alfir1mth
    Replied to Swalih_Vm_3780

    Spoiler? Hyon does

    Ch 188 Ideal Life II
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    The Novel's Extra Nobody
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  • Alfir
    Alfir1mth
    Replied to Swalih_Vm_3780

    I odn't remember now, it had been so long since I wrote this. I didn't really write with the intent to turn it into Litrpg, but their abilities in general should be easy to see if we follow the narrative

    Ch 180 First Iteration II
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    The Novel's Extra Nobody
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  • Alfir
    Alfir1mth
    Replied to Ateeb_Ahmed_6204

    I think his 'meat suit' will suffice, to the elves, he is currently a handsome dark-haired elf with superpowers.

    Ch 10 Irene's Suspicions
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  • Alfir
    Alfir1mth
    Replied to smilesssss

    Eloquent Hyon knows what to say hahaha

    I nod in understanding, realizing the complexity of the situation. "I know it's not ideal, but we have to try. The fate of humanity rests on our shoulders, and we can't afford to let personal grudges dictate our actions. Though you know the Seer in a personal capacity, I hope that won't destroy our friendship."
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    The Novel's Extra Nobody
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  • Alfir
    Alfir1mth
    Replied to smilesssss

    An overpowered hag, she is only a semi-transcendent though with great experience with her authority.

    A strange sensation tingles in the air, and I sense the magic power around us beginning to distort. I turn to Jonghak, my expression tightening. "The pocket dimension we're in is about to be undone," I explain, urgency lacing my words. "The Seer's death is triggering it. This dimension is a result of her abilities."
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    The Novel's Extra Nobody
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  • Alfir
    Alfir1mth
    Replied to smilesssss

    Selfishness at its finest. Nayun didn't want Yeonha waking up seeing her dad in prison.

    Nayun shoots him a determined look. "Call it what you want, but I won't let Jinhyung die today. I'll do whatever it takes to keep that promise."
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    The Novel's Extra Nobody
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  • Alfir
    Alfir1mth
    Replied to smilesssss

    Emotional outburst giving that extra oomph.

    "And it changes everything," Jinhyung adds, his voice a mix of resolution and vulnerability. "This time, it's not just about duty or loyalty. It's about protecting my own flesh and blood. It's real, Nayun. This time, it's all for my daughter."
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    The Novel's Extra Nobody
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  • Alfir
    Alfir1mth
    Replied to Caeruleumm

    "I heard you, thus new chapters just for you~!"

    Ch 217 Destiny XIV
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  • Alfir
    Alfir1mth
    Replied to istabbedelmo

    The young guy cannot use ninjutsu yet, his chakra control is terrible, but he still has something and that's how he is able to use ninjutsu when he becomes jonin. Lee has none at all and is incapable of sensing chakra, that's why in Boruto, Lee still only has taijutsu

    There is a reason why Guy is able to reach incredible heights despite only being able to use taijutsu.
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    Don't Let Tobi Out!
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  • Alfir
    Alfir1mth
    Posted

    This is my WPS Entry for the Year 2024. The story is basically a Lich from a world of superheroes and supervillains, getting the isekai treatment. My WPS entry is for the 'villain' genre. MC was a 'motivated' evil and was mostly unprincipled. The MC has an interesting powerset from the perspective of Supers, meaning he wouldn't do magic, but he more or less could still qualify as a Lich. Instead of a Magic-casting Lich, we have a Psychic-based Lich. MC was OP, and he could likely power stomp his way through the story, but I am going to write it in a more narrative-focus way so that it wouldn't be too predictable.

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    The Undoer
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