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a1c1mthCommenteddepression, narcolepsy, laziness
She can't wake up from sleep!- a1c5mthCommented
this guy doesn't sound attractive - he is pasty with crypt keeper hands, creepy eyes and it sounds like he needs an immediate transfusion. Yuk!
A hand with distinct joints was placed on the guardrail. The fingers attached to that hand were slim, long, and clean, and there was a string of prayer beads held in them. The blood-red prayer beads offset the fair fingers and made them look even fairer. - a1c5mthCommented
continuity? if they are at the auction, how can Yuqi make soup already?????
"Young Master Yi, bad news! After Old Master drank the soup from Lady Yuqi, he suddenly had a high fever. The doctor said that Old Master's condition has worsened and he is in the emergency room right now. Please, come to the hospital!" - a1c5mthCommented
how can a plane land on a helicopter pad? is it a transformer?
One of them was a Boeing 747sp, a limited version worldwide. One cost 1.4 billion yuan, which was the same model as a certain head of the land's plane. - a1c5mthReplied to a1c
I can use some proofreading, too.
As they walked through the garden and into the living room, Fang Yuan noticed the walls adorned with precious calligraphy, paintings, and antique artifacts. So, this was the supposedly impoverished Fang Family… - a1c5mthCommented
proofreading is essential. the author is confusing thr characters
As they walked through the garden and into the living room, Fang Yuan noticed the walls adorned with precious calligraphy, paintings, and antique artifacts. So, this was the supposedly impoverished Fang Family… - a1c5mthCommented
Proofreading needed bc of character and gender confusion.
You Luan dealt with the situation skillfully, to the extent that the following day, media headlines were filled with reports of Li Zizi's lies and attempt to frame her colleague. Internet users hurled curses at Li Zizi, claiming he had a flawed character, poor upbringing, and was a conniving person. Some even uncovered footage of Li Zizi being assaulted by his ex-wife when he was her mistress. In an instant, Li Zizi's reputation spread throughout Ancheng City. - a1c5mthCommented
some serious proofreading needed. character confusion throughout the story.
Before leaving work, Shen Qingyue received a call from Shen Jun, asking her to go back with him. He mentioned that their grandfather had organized a family dinner. - a1c6mthCommentedCh 5 This man is Huo Xiting? The Scumbag's Uncle?
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something is missing. what does his black eyes have to do with what he has to say?
Huo Xiting's black eyes were dark, and he said slowly, with a bewitching tone, "Miss Ye, are you sure... that you are going to support me for the rest of my life?" - a1c6mthCommented
this is out of context with the narrative of the story so far
Ye Beisheng was really shameless. She had just broken up with Yanling and had found another man so quickly! - a1c6mthCommented
yeah, there are a lot of spelling and phrasing mistakes
Ye Beisheng pmomentarilymoment before asking an odd question, "Sir, do you still want to work hard for the rest of your life?" - a1c6mthCommented
proofreading is needed. when there are errors like this, it hinders the story a bit.
She didn't think about how this man knew her surname was Ye. Ither first time proposingposed to a stranger, and Ye Beisheng was a little nervous. - a1c6mthCommented
she has cute attitude
However, Shi Xiu turned around and told Miss An, "I can work here! I'm a college junior! I'm of age; I can work!"detailAfter the Fake Young Lady Stole Everything from Me, I Became the World's SweetheartUrban · ACEE - a1c6mthPosted
- a1c6mthCommentedCh 7 A Gift for Mother: A Pirate Ship
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funny
Heavens, was this a tune? - a1c11mthCommented
Judgmental and jealous - longing for a position that never will be hers.
Aira maintained her warm smile even though she was mocking these two naive girls inside. As a Head Maid for many years in the White Mansion, she would never serve that lowly woman, even if she was her Master's legal wife. Because she believed that the young madam would not last long in this mansion. So, why should she bother wasting her time serving that young madam? She would never do that. - a1c1yrCommented
that screen is dangerous.
She almost screened out of shock when she stepped on the broken glasses at the scene. - a1c1yrCommented
okay, was confused at first. she is not the victim of the accident but a bystander.
She was so scared as she got down from her scooter and approached the damaged vehicle.