SirDemiLich
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SirDemiLich1dReplied to Phantom_VoyageI have read further over the past few days, and can definitely see an improvement in the areas I complained about. It’s nice to see more team building aspects which were rather lacking in game, and I also really like how you introduced Madarame. Proactively introducing palace owners is much more engaging than just stumbling upon them like in the game. Also, introducing Futaba early was really cool, and I hope the same will be done for Kasumi! 😁👍
- SirDemiLich2dReplied to GyaruSupremacy
The matter is transmuted into the persona. As for why they wanna transmute money specifically? Well, the will to live leaving your eyes is a necessary ingredient
"Behold the power that we are able to provide you with!" Caroline said in a proud voice as she pointed at the mask. "Make sure you gather personas and continue to bring them here. That way, you will continue to become stronger and more capable of entertaining our master." - SirDemiLich2dReplied to Phantom_Voyage
I think the inclusion of doc personas could be very cool, but they would have to be earned, like after the fights with the p3 and p4 protagonists, or during the events of PQ2 if you include that
As they danced, the masks they wore started to glow intensely. Their movements began to mirror each other. In a climactic flourish, the masks they wore ignited in spectral flames, converging in mid-air before transforming into the visage of a jackal. The mask of Anubis, god of the afterlife, holding a pair of scales in one of his hands. - SirDemiLich2dPosted
First off, this is an outstanding persona fan fiction. Before finding this, I was tempted to write one myself, but this is better than anything I could put out. I am only on chapter 16, but It has a very interesting take on Joker, and the plot follows just closely enough to the original that you can see a more in depth look at cannon events, but not feel like it’s just a copy and paste of the persona 5 story. Now onto my complains, of which there are a few. First off, the pacing is breakneck, it is incredibly fast, the entire first 3 hours of the game is condensed into 5 chapters, and that speed leads to my next complaints, which is the characters. They are faithful to the original in terms of personality, but it feels like they good from just introducing their names, to suddenly being best friends. Ann and Ryuji are barely introduced, than are immediately shown the palace, and then by the next chapter they are all hanging out at the gun shop. It just has a very weird feeling, because they had barely had a conversation, and now are acting all buddy buddy. Aside from that though, this is a really good fanfic, 9/10 would recommend, just gotta get used to the whiplash from the pacing, I might leave a comment if it gets better.
- SirDemiLich4dReplied to Garvat22
Even better
I'm thinking of giving Itadori a love interest in this story. Who would be the ideal girl? - SirDemiLich17dCommented
Waoh new chapter
Chapter 30 - SirDemiLich27dReplied to SMomoTempest
The background is different and the eyes on the right are slightly looking up
Yang raised her finger as if she wanted to argue before lowering it and shrugging. "Fair." - SirDemiLich30dReplied to Blue_Flame_365(I decided to make this Omake non-canonical. I'll see if I include something about MLP in the story later or create a separate MLP story. For now, I'll let it be something on its own.)
- SirDemiLich1mthReplied to Jester_Advocate
Sauce?
Still, I continued, trying to adapt the forms to the halberd, for three reasons. The first: I didn't want to use katanas, frankly, it suited me. - SirDemiLich1mthReplied to SirDemiLich
Or actually, since he is going north, maybe deerclops
Which ones? Secret, but here's a hint: It's not any part of the guy on the moon. - SirDemiLich1mthCommented
King slime and either water of worlds or skeletron
Which ones? Secret, but here's a hint: It's not any part of the guy on the moon. - SirDemiLich1mthReplied to Horton_Hears_a_Jew
Survival Story of a Sword King in a Fantasy World
At 7-8 years old, he is 4'6. He will max out at 6'3 in Jujutsu Tech. Black Hair, Black Eyes. Average build, with defined muscles. - SirDemiLich1mthCommented
Remember! Future you is making fun of present you, make sure you get revenge by ruining their life!
I agreed, of course, but still, I felt like he had jinxed us. I even commented on that with him, making him realize and agree that it had been a poor choice of words... Well, that was something for future Dylan and Devas to deal with, so I won't worry about it now. - SirDemiLich1mthCommentedThis obsession was strange, frankly. I wouldn't be surprised if I woke up tomorrow and found Devas tied up with vines in Alalia's bed.
- SirDemiLich1mthReplied to Rodr1goR
Chainsaw man
Since Alalia had "met" Devas, she had been acting strangely, and by strange, I mean acting like a love-struck teenager, skipping and jumping around the mansion while laughing cheerfully. - SirDemiLich1mthReplied to trueidiocy_577
Getting armour from mha would leave a paper trail that could be traced back to him, any armour from other worlds would be more difficult to trace, but shinobi armour is great for stealth and hiding his appearance as well. It’s an obvious choice.
[Shinobi armor.] - SirDemiLich1mthCommented"SHINJI."
- SirDemiLich2mthCommented
YES! WE ARE SO BACK!
46 To Have Someone’s Ear - SirDemiLich2mthCommented
I claim these dashes
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Oh no, it seems we may have another bellatrix, because Daphne will definitely get blamed for being related to this
"Nevertheless, please do send out investigators. Even if there are no witnesses, that doesn't change anything for us. I want to know exactly what happened, and who the perpetrators were, no matter if they are alive or dead."