AweMazing
Hi There! I'm AweMazing and I've always wanted to get into writing. I hope to polish my skills on this platform and your criticism is gratefully received. I will however, ignore any idiotic comments.
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At this point it sure feels like "getting sealed simulator" where our mc just loves getting sealed. I understand its for plot reasons, but generally fanfictions start to go bad when the authors try as hard as they can to stay close to cannon. Why does the culling games need to happen? Just write something new from your imagination.
So you mean to say, you will start a company, work hard, grow it, and then 40 years down the line instead of giving it to your child, you'll give it to some rando? Also nepotism means giving your relatives things which dont belong to you. For example if I'm working as a movie director, and only cast people I know. If I'm the producer ( I pay for the movie ) Its no longer nepotism.
Hey bro, with solomons wisdom don't you think he acts too stupid? There's 100's of ways to make money in the real world if you're smart enough. He could just spend 10 minutes learning poker or blackjack or the like, and cheat his way to 10 million dollars bro. Why are you forcing the poor plot point? Just use any method to make him rich and continue from there.
A food theory!
Time skip + flash back no jutsu all the way
bc mara kyu also works xD
Author, you are indian arent you? The only people i know who use only in that context are indians who are used to directly translate from hindi to english while speaking
But Thats just a Theory, A Quirk Theory!
bro the past 4 chapters have been really slow man, can you not just skip the info dump, and do small flashbacks when required? I know you write good stuff which is why I'm still following, but I've stopped reading multiple amazing novels because they got to this point. I know its just free content on the internet, and I honestly have no leg to stand on, but since I've found it a bit dull, I'm sure others have too.
To explain my first point, I do not like the other comments on this chapter because you have proven yourself before, and I think its weird that people who haven't written anything yet can criticize you and your writing. I hope to see where you take it from here.
This is one of the best stories I've found on the internet, and I'm so glad I got to read this content. I honestly didnt expect a TV show like modern family to be able to be turned into such a gripping story. I hope you keep writing, and take this story to its eventual conclusion. I also hope you take enough time to yourself because it seems like you were having a rough time somewhere around the middle. Take enough time, have some rest, and continue writing this amazing story. If you ever do release a original story, please do inform us. This is technically like an orignal story for me since I haven't watch even a single episode of modern family. I think you have a long and fruitful career as writer in front of you. Keep writing, and take care!
I do not like the other comments on this chapter. This is one of the best stories I've found on the internet, and I'm so glad I got to read this content. I honestly didnt expect a TV show like modern family to be able to be turned into such a gripping story. I hope you keep writing, and take this story to its eventual conclusion. I also hope you take enough time to yourself because it seems like you were having a rough time somewhere around the middle. Take enough time, have some rest, and continue writing this amazing story. If you ever do release a original story, please do inform us. This is technically like an orignal story for me since I haven't watch even a single episode of modern family. I think you have a long and fruitful career as writer in front of you. Keep writing, and take care!
So you make mommy a sandwich xD
I think you as an author are maybe salty about some bit of nepotism that you have noticed. Maybe ask yourself if you had to hire someone for a job. There were 100s of people with similar qualifications, but one of them is your brother. ( Qualifications can absolutely be similar if they have average grades in school, average grades in university and have the same degree). Can you truthfully say that you wouldnt hire your brother? What about your mother. If you were looking for fresher teachers, and all of them had the same basic qualifications ( A teaching degree ) and your mother also applied for the same post, can you truthfully say that you wouldnt hire your mother? And if you can, then I think you should take a deep look at yourself and chose what is the reason you want to earn money. If it costs you nothing, but you can enrich the life of people close to you, 99% of people would do it in a heartbeat.
milk xD