I really like the story development part but the writing quality leaves a lot to be desired but overall a good read please keep up the good work, looking forward to this to become one of my favourites
Surrounded by darkness, the young man couldn't speak, feel or smell anything. On top of that, he was greeted by a deafening silence yet despite it all, he felt no fear.
hope you don't mind my suggestion please use Grammarly as it seems there are some errors in the spellings and simple grammatical errors. but the book is fantastic, mind-blowing.