Hippo9999
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Can you, with your infinite storage space brain, remember what it was like to be birthed?
Didn’t he battle mihawk?
Seriously, if he’s moving 199,861,638 m/s it’s a little crazy if you think bullets, which move slower than the speed of sound, could even touch him.
I guess he’s never looked down
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He probably read some of Voldemort’s memories
This story is good. The writing is commendable all the way till chapter 36. From chapter 37 and beyond, spelling mistakes, gender-benders, grammar mistakes, and odd phrases become visible. It’s almost like the translation gets worse and worse. A couple of chapters include hard to read paragraphs, but otherwise the story is good.
Your main character has been a man for 36 consecutive chapters. It’s too late to change it now.
Would be funny to say he had never heard of him.
Weight-loss—-> Featherweight
It’s a common theme for home to refer to himself as we. I don’t know why though.