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This isn't meant to attack or criticize your review, but can I ask if you read all the chapters? Additionally, and I can't prove this without sharing all the Patreon chapters that I have, but characters are not "forgotten" after they have left the view of the story, Again, I'm not trying to attack you or anything, and at the end of the day am thankful for the fact that your review isn't like "I don't like this I'm dropping" or "make me change my mind", but I am looking for feedback.
No. It is not my role as an author to spoon feed readers. I'm here to put images and worlds in my mind onto words on a page. If some people do not like that then by all means they are entitled to their own opinion and I can't stop that. But if somebody literally says "change my mind" then I don't care, my work isn't for everybody. I have an image in my mind of how this novel will play out and if somebody can't wait until that arrives then by all means don't read.
Arthur has more secrets than just the Sovereign Boundary Physique. The Physique is just one of them. The exemption of heavenly laws is much more difficult to hide than a Sovereign Boundary Physique which appears at random. Not to mention information on the World Of Madness.
What? There is no-one around to see it.
I'd ask you how far you have read but I don't think you've read that far given that you've asked this question. His main goal is eternity, or immortality. That is what all Fae Masters should strive for. But more so than that, the main character has a certain fixation on Physiques. I won't go into detail but they play an extraordinarily important role in his decision making and choices. In the current story, as of the roughly 290 chapters I've written thus far, his current goal are Physiques, if you want a definite answer.
I won't rewrite it (mainly because I would have to change quite a few things in a number of the Patreon chapters that I've uploaded), but thank you for your criticism nonetheless. I can see from a viewers perspective what you mean, and that it slightly interrupts the "flow" of the situation or event that I've started. At any rate, criticism like this is more than welcome. And if you've got anymore questions or queries or problems, please don't hesitate to ask.
No one else has gone back in time, therefore Arthur would be the only one who knows. Others had done so in his previous life, but now that he has gone back in time, only he would know.
Think like a "Domain". Or "Territory". Technically a "small world".
Okay. But only the ones that are currently added into the story.
Yes. The "confidence" boost that changed his Intent did partially come from the Sovereign Boundary Physique considering he knows better than most just how strong it is.
To answer in order: No, Laws cannot help with the formation of Intent. No, a single person cannot have more than one Intent (although I do have an exception to such a rule) And finally, in terms of strength, at Arthur's current level of strength, it wouldn't be much different from having another Fae. Intent, just like Laws exist to be nurtured and developed, so currently it would have no such advantage. In the future though, such things will be different and battles between Fae Masters whom have comprehended Laws and Intents will be different to those whom have not.
For the time being it isn't supposed to be fully explained, however it is a power born from the Mind. There are powers born from the Body and the Soul, however Intent is the easiest to form out of the three. Just for reference, Laws are not one of the three powers. Considering that they can dwell within the Mind, Body and Soul.
To sum it up (up until this Chapter at least) Ascension = Rank 5 -> Rank 6 Intent = Born from Mind (Can be formed at any Rank) Bloodline = Born From Body (Can be inherited from a Fae Immortal Ancestor or created during Ascension) Bloodlines are created depending on a few things, such as Laws, Intents, Fae and special treasures or objects. Reading this, you might realize that I haven't done anything for Soul yet, but I won't include what I have planned for that yet.